You told me to click the review button, so I did... now what? JK! So... are you ever going to finish this story?

I love new trainer fics. Its awesome that Nori was able to stand up to her good-for-nothing father

I hope you start posting chapters again. This is really good.

just finished reading what you have up. a great fic and beautiful at times. got to say your character really is easy to warm up to. like the touch of suspense but not letting the 'epic' part of your story overwhelm the normal trainer stuff. too much epic and it... gets to be boring. sounds weird but i'm a firm believer in that it's a _journey_ fic -- it's the journey that counts and makes the destination worthwhile. this is also why i love pokemon fics -- there's plenty of room for growth. btw, it's good that you're taking advantage of the fact that these places are _cities_ and not 'town where gym is' (by this, i mean that things happen in cities other than just battling at the gym although obviously, that is an important part). lol. the trick house chapter was particularly fun to read too.
also, i love the detail. you've got a very imaginative story and the details only make it great. names -- coolness. =)
love what you've done so far and i'm slightly disappointed that you haven't updated for a couple months but i'll keep an eye out for this fic while looking through the pokemon section.
-tjal

hey! i know we both havent updated in awhile, but i finally got around to writing another two chapters... and i hope you will, too. i completely understand that with school, it gives no writing time (it seems).. and hopefully by summer ill be writing a whole lot again.. but just remember that me, and a lot of others, think your story is one of the best on ff.net (really... looking at some new ones is very annoying.. horrible plots, etc.) and plus, you left us with a cliff-hanger! so this is just a note from a fellow writer, saying how much i wish you would continue. thats all for me.. im out :-D

Hello! It's taken me a while to finally get through this but I've finally done it. -_-* Why did Fernando have to leave, and so abruptly and randomly at that? I was kind of hoping that he would stick around a bit longer. It just seemed like their leaving was just a bit too spur of the moment to me. Otherwise, this was a pretty solid chapter. I really liked your descriptions, as usual. You have a knack for those. Good diction. Well anyways, write again soon and I hope that school is going all right for you. ^_^

~*~When the Morning Dew Falls~*~!~*

Ah well Ive only gotten through three chapters, but it is both spellbinding and astounding so far. The descriptions and use of language are incomprehensible. Looking forward to getting caught up with the rest of it. Thanks for checking out Flight, by the way.

Please update!

Oh, and by the way, I don't think Poke Block cases would cost that much...

Yay! Cookie! Oh. I wanna a gummy bear... Ah wel- what the? *mysterious hand gives me gummy bear* Yay!

Beldum. Quite easy, if you figure out Steven has a Metagross, and Steven is the Presidents son, so basically that's the only one it could be.

Also, I'm writing an OT fic, so if you'd like to read it it's called Soul of Dragons. Thanks!

Does this mean Aqua and Magma are sort of nuetral? *hopeful look*

Aww. Does this mean Team Magma is the good team in the story? But then again, that means Team Aqua is evil... Go evil!

Mwahahahaha!

wow... i didn't think i'd enjoy this as much as i did! I'm not familiar with the newer versions of Pokémon... I HAVE played Red, Blue, Yellow, Silver, and Gold though... ^^;; All I can say is, despite my limited knowledge on all these fantastically new items and pokémon, you've done a great job!! I've been trance-reading for almost over an hour!! (or something like that)

Hope you're a consistent updater, or you'll find me on your case!! ^^ just kidding. But really!! This is awesome!

Kadevi

Yay, she kept Indra! I like this chapter just because of that. I was wondering when Hans would come up again, and the scenes in the Centre du Pokemon and when Nori went shopping had some nice "normal" character development (as opposed to the sort of supernatural stuff with Lady Kuroi in the last chapter). As ever, a great chapter overall. Please write more soon!

^_^ Yay for udpate!! *hugs* ^^;; Although I missed it a'cause I was on vacation and couldn't check my FF.net. >< Blargh. ^-^ Go Wattson! First time around when I played R/S, it took FOREVER for me to beat him. >< Training is so BORING. Blargh on training. *puts training on her list of Ultimately Evil Things* ^-^ I feel sorry for them though. Mean ol' Wattson! Caged match. Another cliffie. Indra is adoreable. There is nothing more to say. ^-^ Ja ne!

~Silvie