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| MochaCocaFan 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseHoly sh*t this is awesome. I love your brilliant portrayal of both Yami Bakura and Ryou. And another thing- you are fantastically witty. With most fics, you can literally skip chapters and still get what's going on. With your writing, hell no. A masterpiece. |
| Jenivi7 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseHoly crap that was awesome. Very nicely done with plenty of well developed psychology behind it. XD |
| Servant of Anubis 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked the turn around! "You've been playing into my hands all along." How very like Bakura. Especially that last line. I throughly enjoyed reading this. |
| Ananaka 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI adore you. This is wonderfully written, and by the end I had a smile on my face...uhh...I guess I'm kind of a sadist. Anyway, I love the emotions, thoughts, actions...everything flowed wonderfully, and best of all I feel Yami no Bakura is in character! =D |
| Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really good. :] Extreamly well written and thought out! Wonderful Job!...*Sighs* Poor Ryou...if only he knew how many people cared about him lol. (In our world ;P) |
| Wish-full Thinker 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseOhh...that was freaky... |
| Thunderstorm101 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuse...they're identicle. This was great, I love your work! |
| kenmeishouri 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseohh... me like me like!! the cutting idea was genious... i've about the same things of what you typed from friends... anyway... hope you have a sequel! |
| Pirate Monkey 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abuseYes, happy endings are over-rated. Very nice job! I did notice a few punctuation errors here and there, but aside from that, AWESOME job! |
| Hiro.P 2005-07-21 ch 1, | abuseYay! That's just what I wanted to read early in the morning! Cheered my sleepeh mood up a lot ^_^ |
| L'autre monde 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseSomehow.. I thought for sure from the title it would have something to do with hair, or cleaning... ^^;; but yeah, it was good anyways... |
| C.B.A 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseSee, I'm so glad you feel the same way about endings. They don't always have to be happy like some kind of Disney movie, you know? But I really liked how the one-shot was from Ryou's P.O.V., which made it seem all the more easy to relate to his feelings. It was really clever on your part to have Yami no Bakura do reverse psychology to get what he wants. And here all this time I thought he was just a mindless idiot! (J/K) Anyway, I would also like to say great job for making Ryou and his darker form so IC, b/c a lot of people don't seem to have the talent to make them seem like themselves. I even have trouble myself w/ keeping the people in my story IC, so congrats to you! So great job, and its really a shame this story is a one-shot! |
| Kikyo's killer 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abuseYeah, happy endings are over-rated. Anyway, awasome one-shot! Too bad it's an one-shot. I would like you to continue. |
| withdrawn 2005-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseRa I hope Ryou ends up like that! Bakura isn't really that mean any more right? He took that blow for Ryou at Battle City... |
| Chibi Amo 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseOMG... O_O It's SO KOOL! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ Yami: Excuse her, she's been on the caffine and sugar lately... -_-;; Yami Bakura: I TOLD you to keep her away from Malik's sugar stash, Ryou's cream puffs, her sisters Coke, and Hiei's icecream Malik! >.< Malik: ^^;... Yami and Yami Bakura: ::Glare at him:: Malik: Um... oops? Yami: Oops? Oops?! AFTER ALL YOU'VE DONE THAT'S ALL YOU CAN SAY?! Malik: ;>_> Uh... oopsie daisy? Yami & Yami Bakura: -_-;;... I LUV THIS FANFIC! :) =D ^_^ ^-^ =^0^= (: MUST FAV IT!! JA NE! ~Chibi Amo |