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| Krazi3-AnimeLover 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI love this story!! This is officailly the greatest story I've read so far...I would really appreciate it if you would update soon seeing on how you haven't since 2005..geez that's a long time but either way please up date I beg of you...!!If you don't then I will consider this qabuse for not updating it..it hurts me so there for it is abuse...lolz PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Krazi3-AnimeLover 2007-12-22 ch 14, | abuseI love this story!! This is officailly the greatest stor I've read so far...I would really appreciate it if you would update soon seeing on how you haven't since 2005..geez that's a long time but either way please up date I beg of you...!! |
| Fan of your Fic 2007-07-30 ch 14, anon. | abuseHey just wanted to say that I love your Fic and that I hope that you are going to finish it because it is awsome.Please finish it for your fans. |
| Vespera 2007-06-23 ch 14, | abuseVery interesting reincarnation fic. I like how Rinako's memories are emerging gradually, coaxed by her extended time in Sesshomaru's presence, as well as reading Sachiko's journal. Also, nice take on Sesshomaru, grappling with his own ressurection and the strong attachment to Rin he feels even in her reincarnated form, the attachment he's even more aware of feeling than in the past. I particularly like Ryoichi's character. He started out as a creepy, suspicious waiter in a cafe' and slowly you managed to humanize his personality while you demonized his physical attributes. Intriguing character development here, and I find his interest in Rinako, as well as his protectiveness of Yayoi and his other hanyou friends endearing personality traits that make him an honorable character. I'd like to see some Ryoichi/Rinako "cuteness," as Ryoichi grows into his role as retainer and earns at least a measure of respect from Sesshomaru (or at least, enough acknowledgement of his continued existance). You've made wonderful headway in this story, but there's still so much to explore. Fleshing out Sesshomaru and Rinako's relationship (which is properly Father/daughter in the context of this fic), answering Rinako/Rin's question about Sesshomaru's death, weaving Inuyasha and Kagome into the story, and Nishioka's scheme. Obviously school, The Real World, and other interests sap our time, but here's to hoping you find the interest to continue this clever, original story. |
| Fey Halfkin 2007-01-28 ch 14, | abuseA wonderful reincarnation fic. I really enjoy Sesshoumaru: taking his future carnation's life, how he sees the modern world, missing Rin. And the plot-attempt to use Sesshoumaru is a great twist. Just as you introduce InuYasha.. you stop updating. A pity. |
| Eidothea 2006-11-21 ch 14, | abuseHey, i know it's been over a year but are you going to update this? it'll be a shame if u don't! |
| Silver-head angel 2006-10-22 ch 14, | abusePlease update? It's such a good story! |
| mia 2006-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abusei thought that your story was really good. you had a few errors, but overall you had me trapped within the story. i felt like i was seeing everything through rinako's eyes. i hope that the rest of the story is jut as good and i will be waiting for the plot to thicken with the beautiful demon sesshomaru and the wild flower rinako. |
| Sachiko1991 2006-07-15 ch 14, | abuseWOOHOO! I finally finished reading this from the beginning! FYI I am in love with this story! Please update soon...I think I'll die if I don't find out what happens soon. I hope that you don't take a month like me to update your stories...: P Keep it going...n' Oh my GOD! Crazy Doctor Guy wants to kill Sesshomaru only after he was just brought back to life?!?! Evilness...LOL Sachiko1991 |
| Misutaki 2006-06-13 ch 14, | abuseI'm kind of scared - it's been almost a year! I remember reading this story, a year ago, shortly after the chapter was posted and thinking "OH MY GOD SHE BETTER UPDATE SOON." Well...I hate to break it to you, but a year, is NOT soon. What happened? Did you let this beauitful piece go? You can't! You can't leave the people hanging like this! I MUST KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN! Ahem...to make it short, I love your story, please, if you find the time, I think a bunch of people would appreciate the update. |
| Marianna 2006-05-19 ch 14, anon. | abuseplease update soon, i just can't wait to read charpter 15, your such a talented writer. i wish i could write that good, *tear tear*. Well i gtg, but please update soon, please. |
| FuschiaFinn 2006-05-12 ch 14, | abuseThis story rocks the world and the fact that is is no longer being updated is one of the sorrows of my life. Sigh. Just had to let you know. |
| tenamanda1988 2006-05-04 ch 14, | abuseAwesome fic, definitely going to watching this XD |
| kaino 2006-02-27 ch 14, anon. | abuseI love this fanfic. you need to write more really soon. I cant wait so hurry,k. |
| HawkAngel XD 2006-02-09 ch 14, | abusereally good fic... ^^... update soon! HawkAngel |