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| colleen carson 2008-06-08 ch 2, anon. | abusepretty good. one question, though. i thought the man with the tatoos across his nose asked ahmed if he could give ahmed's sword to his daughter? anyway, so far i like it. keep up the good work! |
| steph m. 2008-03-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseupdate! this is a good story |
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| Sir Les 2007-10-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseLove it mate. It feels like that movie. Characterisations are very good. I would love to see how this goes from here. BTW 13th Warrior was one of my favourite movies so I am happily surprised that I have enjoyed this. |
| Thorsten P. Ziegler 2007-09-06 ch 3, | abuseLovin' everything so far! Cant wait to read the next chap. XD |
| Kuhanten Frost 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm absolutly lving your 13th Warrior fic. it jsut so far seems right like this could actually be a sequel to the first movie. Love it love it love it...can' wait for an update. |
| KirijamaScion 2007-07-27 ch 3, | abuseI'd like to see more... hopefully its not been abandoned |
| Neume Indil 2007-06-24 ch 3, | abuseOoh, things are starting to get good. :) I felt bad for Talib and Hassan both; sea sickness is never fun, but being surrounded by strangers that you can't even understand to speak with & feeling like poo must be far worse! Ahmed seems relieved to be back among his strange northern friends as well, making the whole chapter seem like the calm before the storm. One potential problem I noticed was that the party mounted as soon as they landed. In researching a few of my own stories I read somewhere that while horses can't vomit, they can get sea sick. One source I read said that armies and such would try to give the animals a few hours off the ship before they set out if possible. I hope, for the sake of the horses and the younger guys both, that the trip won't be long! |
| cynicteen 2007-06-17 ch 3, | abuseI like it, faithful to the film. Write more. |
| DCoD 2007-06-12 ch 3, | abuseYay! I'm glad you're still continuing this story. I'm very excited to see what you have in store for Ahmed and the Northmen.. Keep the awesome writing coming! :) |
| Battlecry100 2007-06-12 ch 3, | abusejust saw the movie a few days ago ,loved it, this story is also vary good, please continue! |
| Kuhanten Frost 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuseThese firs three chapters have been very enjoable...I already have the images of mostof the characters in my mind. You've done a great job thus far of capturing the first moments of the Movie with the two young men as well. Its great and I look forward to reading even more. |
| Jenni78 2007-06-01 ch 2, | abuseSo far so good. I noticed that chapter two was posted in 2006. Any plans to continue the story? I think having 'Eban' go back to help again is a neat idea. Did you have any plans of 'Eban' meeting a son he didn't he left in the Northlands? Anyway, I hope to read more. |
| ThumperE23 2007-05-04 ch 2, | abuseGood story so far. I've liked the movie 13th Warrior and the book it was based off of Eaters of the Dead. |
| Spidey3000 2007-04-24 ch 2, | abuseWhy does this site have so little 13th Warrior fanfic? Well this is the best I've seen so far, update soon!! |