Reviews for Before the Storm

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Aaneue 2005-09-05 ch 1,	abuse...Is the father...Sasuke? Either that, or she's trying to murder him by slipping a dangerous drug through mouth-to-mouth. Or am I just dense? I don't understand, at all.
Josh 2004-11-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseYay! An Anko fic, and on top of that one that kinda-semi has a understandable plot. Kinda confused...did Anko really give birth to snakes, or was that a nightmare? Why was Sasuke in her apartment and why did she kiss him on the lips? Argh! It hurts, the pain...tell me I must know, the survival of the human race deprnds on it!!
The Lady Arianrod 2004-04-18 ch 1,	abuseIncredibly interesting and well-written. Anko is one of my favorite characters from Naruto and is definitely my favorite female character. Great look into her relationship with Orochimaru (fascinating...!) and how she reacts to the curse seal. I just think it's so cool how you portrayed her as both submissive and strong... and very realistic. She is quite a human character with a lot of depth... great fic!
Keo Siph 2004-03-06 ch 1,	abuseThat was like plowing through mist. But that's the point, isn't it? That and all the other points... Sugoi... You just can't hate Anko, you know? This is one of less than five fics relating to her... And quality takes precedence over quantity. Although I've heard that constructive critism is the best review... All I can say is that you better not give up on the Naruto-ish girl now! You now have at least one loyal fan!
moreanko! 2004-01-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseanko is prob. my favorate character. just speculating about her past and the strength she must posess to survive and throw off the lure of power from the seal and move on... i wish there were more stories about her; that said, i appreciate yours. it seems like you actually thought before submitting. the ambiguity, her sexuality through it all...her pill-popping. sigh. i'm writing up an anko fic now...but i don't have the willpower to keep it from bubbling up to page after page...anyway, your writing has been appreciated.
nik 2003-12-04 ch 1,	abuseWhat a gorgeous inspection of Anko's character. It was sad and well-written. I especially liked the second half. I see deep depression in Anko (especially after her seal returned) and this fic reflected that so well. What a beautiful job.
Legend and Tempo 2003-11-04 ch 1,	abuseWow. I mean, wow. As an author of an Anko fic myself (an unfinished one at that, which I am NOT proud of), I'd have to say that was ... damn close to perfect. I loved the style, the descriptions, the vagueness. No, no, don't tell them who the father is, don't tell them why Sasuke's there ((I have some of my own guesses)). It was good just the way it was. And were they snakes? But. Just ... wow.
Rei 2003-07-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked it, a lot. The first time I saw Anko, I loved her. She's just such a great character. There should be a lot more fiction about her.. ._. Anyway, although I didn't really get most of it (I'm not that far into the anime, and I haven't read any of the manga) I still appriciated how you wrote, blunt but still leaving a few things to think about. It was nice. And all the poorly written fanfiction is really starting to give me a migrane, so this was definitely a nice break. You should write more AAnko-centric fiction :D
Naraku 2003-07-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseUm I didn't really get who was the father(maybe it's just me) can someone tell me? Also how did she "betray" her teacher?
MaidenInTheMoon 2003-07-01 ch 1,	abuse::looks around:: huh? Is sasuke there?? and who's the father anyways. ::is a complete idiot:: see, I shouldn't be reading all "deep" and "intense" stories like these, -_-() oh well, ^_^ I liked it though, just the plain oddness of it all, pretty darn cool, and how many kids did she have anyways?? oo?? XD
Zenegami 2003-06-29 ch 1,	abusecool but i didnt really get it? was the first part about her being pregnant part of the dream? and why was sasuke there?
Annachan 2003-06-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseWoah, woah. Anko-san!! First time I read something about her. Huh, nicely done really!! ^^
Someone 2003-06-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow O_o
Cha-chan 2003-06-28 ch 1,	abuseyou deserved a signed review! (just joking). this story is just as it is: short and sweet, precise and straight to the point. I personally am getting sick of all the Yaoi stories and want to see more of the rare characters, and Anko has always been one of them. Good work! I know Anko "betrayed" her teacher...but what exactly happened? does anyone know?
Volpa 2003-06-28 ch 1,	abuseThis is a really cool story. I always wished I could find more involving Anko, and the fact that this is downright creepy and wonderful is an added bonus.

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