Aside from being a well written fic, you explored an interesting thread - life on earth for the Saiyans post-Buu. It would be interesting to find out if you can develop this timeline further. :)

I realize that this is a few years old now, but this is a wonderful piece of fiction. It's well-written, flows very nicely, and really captures the essence of the rather unconventional friendship between these two. Great job.

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I thought this was a really good story. Your use of wording and the way you portrayed the characters (especially Vegeta) was awesome. Very nicely done.

hey that was a great fic! are u gonna continue?? u should! i liked the way goku and vegeta were in character

wow .. i really liked this!

I really liked this story; the characters are portrayed in a very realistic way, no OC at all. It's nice to find some V/G fanfics that are not Yaoi from time to time. No offense to all the yaoi authors out there, but I think the real relationship of Goku and Vegeta is (too) often underestimated (which I personally find far more interesting, by the way ^^)...
But anyway, keep the good work up!

So good!!

You explained the delicacy of Vegeta and Goku's relationship so well. It always interests me. The need they have for each other's companionship, especially after the fusion, I would think would be fairly high. Because they would have a special understanding. Not only the last two pure Saiyajin but they had also shared the same body.

Also Goku and Vegeta were perfectly in-character which is also a major plus.

I loved it! Awesome fic.!

Oh Kami...that was so beautiful! The last sentences nearly made me cry tears of joy...heheh. Please, continue...!
Sincerely, K.

I luv it. U put it together very well, might i add. I guess i will have to read more of ur work, from now on.
My compliments,
May :)

I'm not much of a reviewer but i really liked it, you're a good writer and i hope you continue this fic soon!

Wow. This was really good. You did an awesome job writing it.

Ja ne!

Aww, that was so cool! I love Jitto! Interesting take on the fusion dance :) Really enjoyed the fic, loved how Goku tricked Veggie ::grins:: Great one-shot!!

I haven't read a good DBZ fic in a _really_ long time (aboutfive years) but I enjoyed that one. Good job!