I have never heard or seen the poem in the Majora's Mask booklet. Do you think you could e-mail it to me. It would help me to understand this ff. BTW great story!

I love the idea. This is probably one of the more original and touching Zelda fics I've read here. The concept. Keep up the good work.

very nice! beautiful angst, and real. good job!

Holy Crud!

This is the best Zelda fic I've ever read. I really got to know Zelda and how he thuoght. Nobody else ever made the connection for me. You really got something going!

I was gaping three sentences after the poem, sucked into the image of Zelda kicking Epona, desperate to get away from Hyrule.

Completely awsome...

erm...i have a question...how do you consider the real link to be ganondorf?also,realy great poem:) keep up the good work :)

Will he find himself going back in time to become Ganondorf? Or was he really lokking for Navi? That's the only confusing thing about the ending.
(in case you were wondering that was supposed to be a subtle request for a sequel)

for some reason, a lot of your zelda fics remind me of the book 'ender's game' by orson scott card. if you haven't read it yet, you should and definately write a fic about it- i know it would be great

that last sentence is confusing, but it's fitting! You've wrote this down perfectly! Anyway...this was very good!

Okay, I liked all of it, it's just that the end got me seriously confused. Why is Link Ganondorf? do you mean that the 17 year old Link is nothing without Ganondorf, cause that would make sense to me.

Hey PikaCheeka I figured it out! It took some thought but Link is looking for Navi! At the end of TOot Navi flutters away so that it!

The Reveiwer

Hey PikaCheeka I figured it out! It took some thought but Link is looking for Navi! At the end of TOot Navi flutters away so that it!

The Reveiwer

You put some effort into trying to understand the meaning of this phrase even if we the gamers cant figure out the exact meaning of these phrases. Then again I pesonaling doubt we will figure out the exact answer. This story will take the place of number seven on my favorite list.

-the reviewer

Okay, how come nobody gets the ending? _ Duh, people! Actually, it makes sense, PikaCheeka. _ Really good fic. Just goes to show Zelda isn't as nice and wise as you might originally think she is. _ Heeheehee

umm...what?call me stupid, but i dont understand.link is ganondorf?what?umm...well any ways i really liked it. angsty link fics are cool.

The ending sucked. The rest of this was good, but the ending was just plain wrong. You apologized though, so You have recieved Voltor's forgiveness.