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| OriginalCeenote 2006-05-04 ch 7, | abuseOf course this is great. I missed out on reading these on the Realm. I am eventually going to read my way through the rest. Great stuff. |
| Felicia 2005-10-20 ch 22, anon. | abusegood story but the ending was so confusing |
| Luc Star 2005-09-11 ch 22, | abuseman.. the last two chapters have been really confusing... though i understand what's going on but i just can't accept the fact that the X-Men are dead... not the old canuck. oh well.. guess i'll have to wait and see what kind of twists and turns this story is going to take. take care and please.. update soon. |
| Francesca 2005-06-22 ch 22, anon. | abuseA brilliant story. I loved every minute of it. Could you maybe write a sequal? |
| RhiannonUK 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseSaved 'em all the bother of facing off with that god awful Mojo! Great story. |
| Christine 2005-04-21 ch 22, anon. | abusegreat story. glad to see some authors out there who enjoyed the ultimate series as much as me :) just thought i'd tip the hat to ya and say job well done. Christine the pic of my tat is on that link. influenced by ultimate x men |
| Elfkid 2005-01-10 ch 3, | abusehehe- modeling swimsuits... m... mutey bootie... lol :) I've only read one or two of the ultimate comics but I really enjoy the character portrayal so far :) |
| Stoner 2004-10-27 ch 22, anon. | abuseAh c'amon, is this really the way you're gonna end this fic? Rogue and Bobby alive with the unbearable feelings of survivor's guilt? Jean gone, taken over completely by the Phoenix? Xavier dying as a jacka$$, no to oppose Magneto, Logan and the rest dead from the explusion, and Ororo dead from a suicide? It just, YOU just can't end it like this! This is one of the best Ro/Lo fics, especially with the Ultimate line, that I've ever read. I mean, don't get me wrong, I know life's harsh and not everyone will live through bad experiences, but come on! You can't end this fic like this, it had such promise when I began to read it last night to complete all the following day to THIS ending. Well, that's all I'll say, its your story and you can do whatcha want, but I'll just give you my opinion, it shouldn't have ended like this. (If this in fact the last chapter, which I hope deep down is not.) |
| lacroix 2004-09-30 ch 22, | abuseWhoa... that was totally unexpected, sad, creepy... no words for that to be honest... but I loved it! I never thought it would just end like this, OMG... This really will keep me thinking for a while :) Great story! |
| stormlover 2004-08-30 ch 3, anon. | abusethe 3rd part was so funny. i loved the whole scene where 'Ro is thinking about Logan, Hank, and Peter, it had me laughing. anyways keep up the good story!! |
| gypsy 2004-07-17 ch 22, anon. | abusewonderful story ... absolutley wonderful .. kept me hooked begining to end .. woudl love to see what happens next...**poke** **prod** please |
| Digital Tempest 2004-07-14 ch 22, | abuseWow... that was a really a turn of events. I'm going to have to sit a savor this one for a moment. I've never really done that with a fanfic before. Many books have left me in a state where I think about the ending for hours afterward, and this fic is going to be the same way. I'm just blown completely away. Man, I love that. |
| IMHO Nienna 2004-07-14 ch 22, | abuseWhat? What? What? What? What? What? Wow! What a freaking unexpected ending! You've really made me wonder what really happened here! Like, did the phoenix give her some kind of dream there in the end when she took the pills to take away her guilt before she passed or was Wolverine really there? I'm thinking he wasn't because he wouldn't have let her die. But then the ending makes me wonder if they weren't alive like Wolvie said in the end. Cause if they are and the flaming bird everyone keeps seeing is always around Storm then maybe Jean can save Storm somehow? But that last line pretty much says it all. Okay, enough thinking already! I liked this story with all it's twists and turns and even the ending. Ciao. |
| DiAbLa-TrAvIeSa 2004-07-11 ch 22, | abuseO_O OMG!! That was so...so...unexpected I'm still in shock |
| Isis Aurora Tomoe 2004-07-06 ch 22, | abuseThat was unexpected. Massive character death, eh? Great way to end the story. I'm a little shocked, because that was something I wouldn't expect from you, but it was good nonetheless. Can't wait to read what comes next from you, m'dear. I know it'll be great! |