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xxxLonely Shadowxxx
2009-07-25 . chapter 16
Option 3!!
Merrymow
2008-12-05 . chapter 16
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Halatia Artemis Louise Potter
2008-10-09 . chapter 16
I'm for either Option one or Option three. I loved this story just as it is, and would love to see you fix any mistakes in it, but I'd also like to see how you see the story going now that you've had 3 years to contemplate it. So I guess I'm leaning towards option three. But I'd be happy with either of the two.

Hoping to see an update soon,
Halatia
lotrox
2008-09-06 . chapter 16
You've got to be happy with your writing, and, although I am one of those who absolutely love this story and have read it many times in its unfinished abandoned form, I do agree that it could be a hell of a lot better. Personally I think you should re-vamp the story, in three years your writing is bound to have improved, and the story could change from being just 'good' to 'bloddy fantastic' (typo deliberate). That is my feeling. Even if it takes a long time. Better to do something that takes ages than nothing at all!
HappyWoman
2008-09-05 . chapter 16
I'd like Option #3 if it's possible :)
You're a great writer. I was really sad to see this story go. This story is awesome and I really do hope you continue with this story. It's great!
BRANDY
2008-05-20 . chapter 15
why you abandoned the plot? it's gorgeous !
it's almost the best dark Harry I've read, and just because it isn't finished!
PLEASE! UPDATE IT!
crystal_starlight
2006-12-20 . chapter 15
This is a very weird story, or at least this chapter is weird and doesn't quite make sense. How can Voldemort simply waltz into the ministry and Dumbledore greeting them pleasantly? This is all very confusing...
Barranca
2006-08-06 . chapter 15
I'm afraid Dumbledore has worsened the situation by appearing. I don't see Harry wanting to spend his time with the Light any more than with Voldemort. Harry should just play Slytherin for a while and plan for the future.
Barranca
2006-08-06 . chapter 10
That was some nice show!
annoyed
2006-05-16 . chapter 15
YOu Fucker!
your story says its complete
change the description
because your wrong
Lothirielwen
2006-04-04 . chapter 15
More!! More!! More!!

This has got to be one the most unique harry/Voldemort fics I've read... and since it's one of my favorite pairings, I've read alot of them (and always looking for more...)

can't wait to read more of it
JediMasterWithAPen
2006-03-06 . chapter 15
UPDATE! please?
JediMasterWithAPen
2006-01-27 . chapter 14
I really like this! And if you want Ideas as to what should happen than feel free to E mail me.
NevertickleasleepingDragon
2005-11-08 . chapter 15
Wow cool story so far, but when are you goin to update!? I really want vOOLDIE TO GET hARRY WOOHOO
tA
skyash
2005-10-10 . chapter 12
great story and all of your other ones are as well
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