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| Animation Emir 2007-07-07 ch 1,  | abuseAw. Hatori has a hard exterior, but he does deserve something (or rather, someone) special. Even if I don't like incest, Akito had no right hurting both him and Kana. Ayame was right. Akito better not harm Mayuko or else! I know, she's the teacher of Tohru and company who only appears in the manga. Amazing she doesn't shield her eyes when Hatori becomes human again; did his clothes stay on, I wonder? And how can he breathe without being in water? Never mind the ranting. Personally, I don't get the idea of seahorses considered as baby dragons. Dragons are based on archosaurs, so maybe Hatori could become an age-old present-day reptile. The Komodo dragon would be a bad joke, so how's about a tuatara? |
| Karma-Beads 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abuseAh I love this,very dramatic yet heart aching.Hatori was like a defensless child and Mayu was really in character in this fic. |
| nostalgic-maiden 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseaw i love your story! it's got such a nice feel to it. i've always loved stories with rain and emotion. great job! nostalgic-maiden |
| Nevermore.Neverwhore. 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseoh my god i was neally crying at the end of that, it was so good, and there are so little of these stories dang it. *starts to sob* he didnt transform, im so happy. they make a much better couple than hatori and kana *hides from cabbages being thrown at her while shouting "what mayu is much cooler and wouldn't have left him"* |
| kayla 2006-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was AMAZING! i'd have to say its one of the bestest mayu x hatori fanfics ever! please make a sequel! i'll be your fan forever. i promise! |
| kayla 2006-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseHA HA HA! had a very shiny nose... |
| Infinitis 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abuseAh! yay! his bond is broken! A very heartwarming story and Lovin' it! o.- |
| mandella-sama 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseaw SO CUTE! I wonder why he didn't transform,.. I can't wait until all of Fruits Basket is finished. I want to know what happens! It was a cute one-shot. -Mandella-sama |
| Lynsea 2006-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abusei absolutely LOVE your story SO MUCH! i'm so seriously in love with your writing styles! i'm begging you...please write more stories about other couples like this story! it's so sweet and gorgeous and it's so wonderful that it doesn't need to be critiqued!! PLEASE write more stories about other couples, too! :D i really appreciate your writing skills! |
| Yoru 2005-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, that was...wow...there needs to be more of these kind of stories.^^ hope to see more of your work! Later! |
| hitokiri-tomoe 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abuseDid you just say beta-tester? I’m here. ^_^ That is, if my computer doesn’t break down. But I’ll try. You only have to ask. ~hitokiri-tomoe |
| kaischely 2004-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseand i was wondering why takaya natsuki drew mayuko after shigure says there might be more for hatori...good job |
| Kyo's-catnip 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseaw, i love fics where haotri is happy! nice work! very good writing! |
| LSR-7 2003-10-07 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written in its quiet way. |
| Blue Quartz 2003-07-07 ch 1, | abuseNice, very touching. I never really thought of this couple before. I like the words highlighted by the star markings, they were cool and insightful. Will you keep this fic going or is it just a one shot? Either way it was very good. Peace |