Good job on the view of exhaustion! I also like how you showed the Golden Pair understanding each other.

Cute and sweet. Beautiful. :)

This was really cute. The final ending line brought the chapter to a close in a way that really made me smile.

Interesting story. Cute might be quite fitting in this story. ^^. I'm not sure if he's talking about Oishi always siding with Tezuka or if he's asking the other if he's tired. O.o Maybe the former then... ^^.
Nice work.

Golden Pair fic with just the right amount of intimacy, check. THANK YOU. *loves*

howcute~ e_e
*melts*

This story was absolutely adorable! Everything was nicely subtle, and very engrossing. The writing is nice and flows well. Loved it!

And, if you're interested and have the time, I was so impressed, that I'd like to ask you to take a look and consider joining a TeniPuri RPG that a friend and I are starting.

http://matchpoint.northmark.net
http://livejournal.com/community/match_point/info

Thanks!

That was SO cute!
The beginning really cracked me up.
This is such a precious pairing, I really hope you'll write more for them.

OH i love how itz going so far! i love this coupling! XP continue plez plez!

Wai...~ X3 OishixEiji is so cute... >u

geez...that's quiet an interesting story.Full of understanding feeling.Ma...i'm melting again...why yaoi si so 'pleasuring' me?Geezz...i can turn out to a ** if i continue like this.Eh?I'm a girl?Okay,i'm not going to be 'yuri'.I'm not ready for something like that.too intense.