please update this story!

What a fascinating idea! I never would have thought of this.

Just Jill

interesting...I can't wait for the next chapter. It's definitely a an idea I haven't seen used in quite a while and I definitely don't remember it being used with Cam, or any ranger for that matter.

are you not writing this anymore? this is a fantastic idea, one that i would like to see to the end. aside from nalanzu's fic, which is still different from this, it's pretty original and like i said, a fantastic idea. and the whole time shift thing is really nicely done. please finish it.

but btw, cam is supposed to be the best out of all of them, having the advantage of two ninja parents. so he would have had no problem beating tori, or any of them for that matter. he's pretty much in character though. the bitterness was a bit self-pitying, but eh, the whole idea of this story makes up for it all. this will be a hunter/cam i hope?

Oh wow! This is awesome! I've got to continue reading!
Good job so far!

that was really good.

Hey! This is a awesome fic!! Please update soon!!

Whoa...this story is really good. I like the premise and how well you describe the events and characters. Great work!

Interesting story.

Slightly evocative of Joe Rovang's "Worse of Two Evils," which was one of my absolute favorite alternate universe stories. Looking forward to seeing the rest of it, and especially how the other Rangers have weathered the storm in this timeline. I'm going to guess they've had to grow up much the same way Cam did, in a very short amount of time.

Though I am more than a little curious why Cam thinks Blake and Hunter would even be at Storm Chargers in this reality. Assuming the Wind Rangers were never activated, there's no reason for Lothor to infiltrate the Thunder Rangers into their lives. And by all accounts, Blake and Hunter didn't originally live near Blue Bay Harbor.

Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Another terrific chapter. Beautifully written, and I can't wait to see exactly how Cam's removal from time has brought about these changes.

Actually, I think the language used in writing should reflect the characters and mood of the story at least as much as the audience, and on second thought, considering Cam's character it's probably close to perfect.

uh oh! Where's Cam? I hope he's OK and will get back soon...great fic!

You know, I had a vaguely similar idea to this (read: messy and nowhere near as clear) a while back, but couldn't make it into a story... so I was thrilled to see the summary. And I'm even more thrilled to see such a well-written first part.

So I'm going to echo the other reviewers so far: I can't wait to see more of this. :)

*applauds* Certainly one of the best PRNS stories that I have read yet. Great writing, with a nice smooth pace and good characterization. It's interesting that the characters themselves were a little darker than how they are portrayed on the show. The story is interesting thus far and I look forward to future chapters. ^_^

Good story! Please continue :)

hey this story is great, I like how you have shown Cam as a loner and not really fitting in, lots of fics don't portray the characters as they are. Please write the next chapter soon I want to see what happens.