Learn how to write, LOSER!

We all know that you are Grumbledook.

And your story blows.

YOUR STORY IS A PIECE OF CRAP, JUST LIKE YOU!

That was a very good story. I really enjoyed it. Keep

writing the good ones. Can't wait to read the next one.

yeach. this was void of emotion. boring and out of character.

Pretty good.

Cute story so far. I'm looking forward to the rest.

So far so good. Go on.

Good story!