please gone on i can read bra and goten fics all day lol.

You just need a little editing... (Please forgive me if I'm being to rude about it.) Anyways I love it! And so I'm keeping it because it's a Goten and Bra fiction.

NOOOOOOOOOO! DONT STOP THERE! I LOVE GOTEN AND BRA! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! PLEASE!

Pleas write a wedding! That was soooo good!

Oh no! It's Vegeta! Please Daddy! Don't kill my Goten!

this is really good, especially for your first fanfic...

great story

This series was GREAT! Please write a epilogue.

Heh, and I always thought Saiya-jins had no sense of humor...

YES! I WANNA SEE THE WEDDING! this is so cool, please more!

That was so sweet! I loved it! You should keep going or write another B&G ficcy. _

MORE MORE MORE! I luved it! It was so cool! Keep it up! _

Well trunks is smiling at pan!

I loved it! I think you should go on or make a sequel. Which ever one, but please do one or the other!

Hmm...I thought it was really good, but I don't think that Goten would be able to do much damage to Vegeta. Anyway, ignore that outburst, it was good. _