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| Gisela 2004-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery beautiful. I can close my eyes and see your words in my mind. One of those stories I respect because there is evident skill behind their creation. The plot was simple and therefore difficult to write and yet still maintained a title of being interesting and captivating. Your words and the solid theme behind them carried this story. Beautiful, really...I'll leave with that. What else am I to say? |
| Feirdra 2004-01-07 ch 1,  | abuse^-^' This is way too subtle for me! I was totally confused about who was who for a while... but the latter section cleared that up admirably. And the entire thing just has this whispery shadowy beauty to it, brushing quietly against the senses and leaving one with the impression that although one's fingers have touched dust, there is far more beneath the surface. ^^ Absolutely gorgeous. ~Fyredra~ |
| Ailetoile 2003-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI wish you would write more Naruto fanfics. The two you have posted are absolutely wonderful :) |
| deadfornow 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseIt annoys me that good fiction like this gets ignored while the increasingly stupid ones get attention. This is a truly lovely piece. The interaction between Naruto and Sasuke was wonderful. |
| Suffering Angel 2003-06-30 ch 1, | abuse;; so sad and sweet and... dammit. well, that dask of Sakura/Lee made me happy, as well as the Sakura/Naruto-Naruto/Sakura. and I even support Iruka/Naruto. meaning, all couples approved. damn, angst this late at night... rocks. loved it. keep it up |
| RyoBaroque 2003-06-30 ch 1, | abuseOne Word: "Woah" This story is beautiful, breathtaking, it just blew me away. I just can't believe this work of art is here on FF.net when it should be published (with the author of Naruto's permission of course). This is a wonderful story, a bit angsty, but still wonderful. I love the ending, very nice wording and the feeling is just perfect... if I have enough room in my Favorites list, I'll see if I can add it, if I don't, then I'll make room. I'll also recommend it to any Naruto fans I know of, for they should also get a chance to read this story. -D8I8S, "Imagination in the Unimaginable"- |
| gelfling 2003-06-30 ch 1, | abuseDude, I am blown away. That was very powerful, but I'm not quite sure how. The images, the language...it was amazing. Yes, it was very subtle, becuase I wasn't real sure who the characters were for a while, but I had a feeling it was Naruto talking. Very good, you should write more like this. |
| Senre 2003-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseUhn...it's somewhat difficult to understand (mostly due to the lack of names being used for the first half of the story, and Sasuke giving his typical non-informative comments at the end), but I love the way you've written it. The ending is utterly gorgeous with how complex the possible interpretations are, yet how simple the wording is. So, all around: terrific job ^^. |
| firedraygon 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* Naruto angst...you gotta love it. I hope you write a sequel to this because it's so good! ^_^ Well, write more fics soon! ~firedraygon97 |
| JadeTiger 2003-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery Interesting, and very well writen! Great job! |