i like it a lot

can't want for the next part in it

AWW...SO CUTE! I love this one!

Aw, so cute so cute so cute! I love it! _

Aisha

0_o Wow... I've got tears... Hold on just a sec...

* runs from the computer and grabs four muses, Yama, Ken, Alan Rickman and Tim Curry from their little hole in hammerspace and hugs them. After blowing her nose on Yama's shirt, comes back to the computer*

I love it when Yama acts all older brother, and what Ken said about loving, and everything! I loved it!

That was very, very cute. Minor note: Tai and Dai's Japanese names are Taichi and Daisuke. :) The characterizations weren't quite what I'd call 100% spot on, but it was cute regardless. The main thing...well, before this, Yamato had kinda gotten with Sora, and now he's all over Ken...it just doesn't quite fit with his personality. He doesn't even think about her here. You said it's an AU, but you might want to mention on if that whole Sora/Yamato thing happened or not first. I'm not a fan of them, but what happened happened and it's a bit sloppy not to mention.

As I said, I did like it (the paragraphs are squeezeable!) but I think it would've been better if it had been more original than just the text of the episode essentially put on "paper", with Yamato's thoughts. Maybe more of Ken's side of things, or something?

But overall, not too bad.

This was sweet, I loved. There should be more Yamaken, it makes the world so much brighter.