oh no... bless them.. bless then all. please update more NOW!. I WANNA HEAR THE REST!. DON'T ASK ME WHY JUST OBAY MY ORDERS. THINK OF THE COOKIES!

oh, please, continue if you will.

It's so sad, but why, if he called to him? Why did he still take the step?

This was so sweet and so sad. Please write more Suikoden fanfiction like it.

O_O *blinkies* Naaaaaaa... *bites lip* Ch! *face crumples* You know... no matter how many times I read this fic (this ain't the first, Kagetsuya... _) it always gets me... right there at the end. It's so sad... *sniffles* Angst? Oh HELL yeah, you'd better believe it. *scrunches face up* But as long as you write it, I'll read it... _

Uh...while it was well written, I was confused as to who was who. But first person tends to do that to me. heh

That was very good, nicely written. I hope you write more.

Oh! It's you! The chickie who wrote the dronky (yes, dronky d) ficcies on the other.. place. You know what, chicke-who-wrote-the-dronky-ficcies-on-the-other-...-place, :B:B:B:B:B I LOVE YOU! Will you marry me? See, I'm married to Irvine and Jessie and Lyra and all the (cute) Michaels in the world (Irvy: my boyfriend?)! Well... Actually, not really... Not anymore... Lyra divorced them! . But uhm... You know how Bumbutt-aww, crack, i forgot what I was going to say. ._.; Uuuuuuuhh... I'M GONNA EAT BUMBUTT, BIATCH! / He's blocking me at the moment :/ and he won't get on aim, so.. BUMBUTT, I'M GOING TO EAT YOU! ::pouts:: You know what is such ? That he thought that the chat was (and i quote) "weird as hell" (he said that to lyra-mun.. she told me so :B) and so I was like... f'er to you O 'cause like... cracks, were you there when he came in the chat? you were, right? and so like.. he was being all stupid.. and boring... and he's doing the exact same thing that Jess did. :X making more than one char so he can like... have more wives... Pshaw(that word's mah new fave! XD), that whorehole! / and he can erm.. cyber XB! XD! with lotsa chickies... :B:B:B:B:B:B:B YOU HERE THAT MR. MICHAEL OF THE WATER? YOU ARE AN IDIOT! AN ! I hope that one day / You're going to read this, you person who's so fifth Tier! O And then... WE'RE ALL GOING TO EAT YOU, MR. WATERHOLE! Aaaaaggghhh! ::goes crazy:: ... ::hours of silence pass:: Oh,yeah! :B:B:B:B:B:B a review! Well... I didn't really goggle at the story, but it was pretty good... I thought you didn't like sappy stuff, though, eh? Like all that stuff you were saying about M&L-muns... (i don't mind typing out chicke-who-wrote-the-dronky-ficcies-on-the-other-...-place, but I type Michael-mun and Lyra-mun so many times that I think I'm going to eat crackers!) You said that you ddoooonn''tt like sappy stuff you duckhole! XD Mwahaha! And you write all these "sappy" ::coughs:: fics. Mwahahaha! The world is MY oyster! All the CUTE MICHAELS are MINE! O ...except for the pedophile ones and the old granpa ones... ::shudders:: I gave them to Irvy. ROFLMAO. Crack. I wanna go talk with them again. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D. Mwahahaha! Good ficcy, I guess. ;] ::bows:: Goodbye, my love...