*cry* *no Wail* I loved it! It was wonderful! It was sad! It was tragic! It was beautifully written. I actually have a similar story I'm about to post, but it's also a lot different. ^,^ I was doing some research to see what kind if SM/Little Mermaid stories are on here. Yours is the 4th I've read and tops the others by FAR! The others are very childish and your is fantastic.

With Much Love,

your story is wonderful i watched the movie this story is based on when i was little and it broke my heart because i thought it would be like the disney movie your is just as beautiful as the movie and it captured the emotion of it it is a beautiful story and i hope you luck with your other stories

That was brilliant but so sad!

This is a greaat story. i liked how you stay with the original version of the little mermaid. i just wish it could have ended in a happier ending.:`( this story also made me cry.

Dear Rose of Sociaty,

This story was possibly the best I've ever read it was amazing, I was so Wrapped up in it i felt like a chaacter. I felt tears coming to my eyes when I got to the part where you were describing the death of serenity I think you are a really talented writer and that you captured and described the emotions of the characters outstandingly. Please keep writing if you made cry I am sure you will make others feel just as I have. Don't ever give up writing because you have natural talent.

Your's sincerly

aquacrystal

aw, this stry is so sad n sweet. i luv the way u write stories, they'r a change n bring out loads of emothions frm ya! keep it up!

On my god! It's so sad but beautiful at the same. I loved the anime version of the Little Mermaid. Cried for ages but feel loved. Keep writing, the greatest love story of all! ;)

Thank tou so much for writing this beautiful story. I didn't think anyone remembered the anime version of The Little Mermaid.

O/T: Could anyone maybe hook me up with a copy of the film {even though I know it's out of print :(}? I'd greatly appreciate it.

Keep up the great work, Polly xx

That didn't end right but i still love it

Oh... *sniff* I cried! Waaaaahhhhh... Couldn't you have made a happy ending? Oh, I hated this version of the tale, absolutely despised it! Too sad... like Romeo and Juliet... great story, but a tragedy! I hate tragedies!

Wao, that's just too pretty. I love your story.

Oh beautiful but very very sad. I have heard this version of the Little Mermaid in a childrens book of my sisters but I think I like this one better! ;-)

This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read.

oh my god... that ending... i'm going to cry...

PLEASE WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT!