That was brilliant but so sad!

This is a greaat story. i liked how you stay with the original version of the little mermaid. i just wish it could have ended in a happier ending.:`( this story also made me cry.

Dear Rose of Sociaty,

This story was possibly the best I've ever read it was amazing, I was so Wrapped up in it i felt like a chaacter. I felt tears coming to my eyes when I got to the part where you were describing the death of serenity I think you are a really talented writer and that you captured and described the emotions of the characters outstandingly. Please keep writing if you made cry I am sure you will make others feel just as I have. Don't ever give up writing because you have natural talent.

Your's sincerly
aquacrystal

aw, this stry is so sad n sweet. i luv the way u write stories, they'r a change n bring out loads of emothions frm ya! keep it up!

On my god! It's so sad but beautiful at the same. I loved the anime version of the Little Mermaid. Cried for ages but feel loved. Keep writing, the greatest love story of all!! ;)

Thank tou so much for writing this beautiful story. I didn't think anyone remembered the anime version of The Little Mermaid.

O/T: Could anyone maybe hook me up with a copy of the film {even though I know it's out of print :(}? I'd greatly appreciate it.

Keep up the great work, Polly xx

That didn't end right but i still love it

Oh... *sniff* I cried! Waaaaahhhhh...... Couldn't you have made a happy ending? Oh, I hated this version of the tale, absolutely despised it! Too sad... like Romeo and Juliet.... great story, but a tragedy!!!! I hate tragedies!!!!

Wao, that's just too pretty. I love your story.

Oh beautiful but very very sad. I have heard this version of the Little Mermaid in a childrens book of my sisters but I think I like this one better! ;-)

This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read.

oh my god... that ending... i'm going to cry.......

PLEASE WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT!!!!!

Aaaackkkk!!!! ::falls off chair:: Where's the REST!?!?!? :::: I want the REST!!?!!?!? ::smiles::

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! That is Good!!!!!! Keep Writing!!!!!!!!