These are really really sad. I like the first three chapters but, and this is not your fault, I can't feel sorry for pettigrew. Maybe in the next book he'll make a noble sacrafice or something and I'll feel sorry for him but right now...just no. Anyway, great fic and I hope to see more out of you.

Wow, this is really cute! Defiantly keep it up

Wow, I loved these poems. They were written beautifully and I can't wait to read more. :)

Wow, this makes you feel sorry for Peter Pettigrew and that's hard to do. This poem is very depressing but good. It was so well written. I'm happy

Wow, this makes you feel sorry for Peter Pettigrew and that's hard to do. This poem is very depressing but good. It was so well written. I'm happy

This was so beautiful. It gave me goosebumps. I love how you have him thinking of his friends with regret. So many fanfic authors don't even try to make him seem human.
All of these poems are really wonderful. I hope to see more of them.

you use a style which is extremely difficult for most people to pull off at all, and while you have some blotchy spots, on the whole, this was excellent, both in subject matter and writing.

I honestly admire your poetry. Most of these come out really bad on paper. Yours is really good though

Wow they're really good! *thumbs up*

You could write more like Crabbe lol

Fiona xx

That was really good but i prefered the other two poems. This is very poetic... you could have a future in that.
By the way thanks for reviewing my story

that was really good. How do you come up with these?

That was really good. The first ever poem form of harry potter i read... well done

Ohh, you are really an excellent poet! I was pleasantly surprised--HP poems are difficult to write! I've attempted a few, but I think I like yours better. Impressive!

these poems are beautiful. Why didn't you write more of them?

Another great poem. This one gives more detail - but it sounds really good if you read it out loud. Good job!

Sara