I am actually leaving a review YAY! Because I would like to give you a little critique, well, critique-esque. I do this out of love so please don't be offended because I am no writer/english major, but if you are going to be changing scenes and/or points of view in a chapter please put a break or indicate it somehow so the reader is clued in, because some spots were a little disorienting. Yeah, this entire review sucks grammerically but anyway. Just saying...yeah...so...there...

OH MY GOSH THAT STORY WAS AMAZING! i loved the way you wrote their relationship, the raw passion you were able to convey was simply amazing. your attention to detail especially with their feelings really made the characters and the situation come alive. you did a brilliant job and i simply adore this story!

~Jess

one word: **!

VERY CUTE!

OMG! This is the best Harry Draco story I've EVER read. It's bloody amazing. You are an absolute genius. A God. It was all so real. Feel the love.

It's so passionate! Everything is filled with feeling! I feel almost as if I were there! You are an amazing writer and this is really a masterpiece.

Brilliant story, very well written. the torture scenes were horrific.
i wouldn't have thought that Remus would have been that mad though...


well done!

Oh~ It's over already? Darn it.
That was so FABULOUS! *worships the fic* I adored it. Remind me in a few weeks to come back and read it again. ^~
Anyway, it's okay that it took so long. (I did say I'd be happy just as long as it came out! *never updates her fics, so shouldn't be saying anything* Mum is the word...)
As for being here "to the end," it was my pleasure. I enjoyed this immensely and I can't wait to read more from you!
Good luck on getting into the college of your choice! (My goal is to get into [but not necessarily go to] Stanford or Berkeley. Odd, I know. I still have a year or so before I have to do applications, so... *is sick of highschool already* Why can't it be done after freshman year? I'd be done already, then! --; )
I love this fic! ;-; It's over...
Anata

hehe !! Yummy slashy goodness, oh how I love it ;) Well done, a great story !!

i just spent most of the day at work reading this story. stumbled on it trying to find something to do while on a break and just had to finish.
its quite a engaging story, with all the big words to prove it. *smile*
i liked also that the abuse by Lucius wasn't enough to break Harry.
And i like stories where Draco is able to express his feelings non-verbally and harry understands him.
figure it makes me a lover-of-the-fluff but i don't mind.

*sigh with relief* All is not still perfect, but... It seems all will beokay, i wonder how Ron and 'Mione will react?*grins* And What is there exactly with 'Witch Messages'?...

Well, well, well. I must say, I am quite happy with the way this is turning out, -Professor-. *giggles* Sorry, I had to.
Anyway, as I have said previously, I love this story. The emotion that you have Harry, Draco, and now even Lupin, display is fabulous, heartwrenching. As for the little things...what IS going on with Remus? He seems...heartbroken. Dead lover, maybe? *coughcough* And the diary...interesting touch you've got there. I like it. ^-^
I would wait forever for an update...just as long as you gave one. (Don't get any ideas, there... ¬¬)
Anata

I've read so much of your story at seperate intervals--i.e. laptop, notebook, 5th period... that I've neglected to read the full thing on the internet. *Slaps hand in recrimination* Your descriptions of Harry's torture, both inward and outward, are both beautiful and reflect and deep-seated pain; the reader almost (and does) cringe, feeling the fork as it pierces our own flesh, and the dagger as it pierces our lovelorn heart. Draco's pain, and his resolution, almsot hurt worse, because we can imagine ourselves in such a situation--worried deeply abou the one, or ones, we love the most. And a healthy dose of Lupin action is always good too ^_^. The way you potray him is quite candid--not to brag, but that's a compliment coming from me, as he's the only character I can really get into the skin of. The torture here almost seems to obsess you; like Elizabeth Bathory bathing in blood, you cannot seem to quench your thirst for the agony the characters must go through to achieve the "happy ending"--that's what makes your writing so extraordinary; you are able to convey to the audience that very pain... showing and not telling, as Zener would say. Though your use of the word "sated" makes me think (disturbingly) of him *shudder*. I shall continue on, and if I find you haven't finished, I will... what was the word you used in one of your replies on the site--FONG you. Keep going, love, and keep it up.
My best to you, comrade in HP fiction (har!)
--Aubrey

*sniffl*sniffl* Poor Harry and Draco. They're so confused. But, I shan't worry! They'll be getting back together...sometime. Right?
And you killed Lucius (yay)!! Voldemort was very stupid to do that to one of his loyal and devoted followers. Oh well, his loss.
As I have told you before, I love this story very much. I'm almost afraid I'll love it to death! >>; Thanks much for the updates and I can't wait for more!
Anata

smart bird...