AAH! Cliffhanger! EVILE! LOL, seriously though, VERY good so far. Keep it up!

o.O...O_O!! Awesome! The first chapter captivated me. Word from word. I love your writeing! You're a great author. Please make more stories of these two, please. ^_^

I see you still mess up your tenses here and there. Doing a lot better this time around though.

As far as the plot premise, a mass serial killer and Kei working together? Having Yuri to be saved makes some sence and all, but something doesn't feel right. And why the heck does this half cliche evil guy know so much about the pair?

I'll keep reading it in case it gets better. Keep it up.