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| David Swinton 2006-09-19 ch 5, | abusePlease... Más, más, más... Una historia super super romántica... Si Martin y David pudieran existir me quedaría con David sin dudarlo. Un saludo de David Swinton |
| Jamie Thompson 2003-12-07 ch 5, anon. | abusethe story was really cute, but my fav was a wish come true and the one where he is her angel. keep up the good work! love always- Jamie f/15/kansas |
| Manda 2003-07-28 ch 5, anon. | abuseIt was a cute story, really, it was. I enjoyed it. I found the A/N commentary in the middle of chapters very distracting, however. Very good though, you're a great writer. |
| Matrix Refugee 2003-07-02 ch 5, | abuse::Taking a moment during her vacation to catch up on fanfics...:: Aw! That's cute! At first I was scratching my head, thinking this was going to be some kind of expansion of "A Wish Come True", but I kept reading...Nice job! You do a good job portraying David's personality: Very human (Almost "More human than human", to quote "Blade Runner"), very innocent, very sweet. Great work! I can see that kind of sibling rivalry happening between Martin and David. And of course...may I link this to my site? (If I didn't ask that, there'd be something wrong with me!) |