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Reviews For: David’s Girlfriend: A Very Special Summer

David Swinton
2006-09-19
ch 5,
abusePlease... Más, más, más...
Una historia super super romántica... Si Martin y David
pudieran existir me quedaría con David sin dudarlo.

Un saludo de

David Swinton
Jamie Thompson
2003-12-07
ch 5, anon.
abusethe story was really cute, but my fav was a wish come true and the one where he is her angel. keep up the good work! love always- Jamie f/15/kansas
Manda
2003-07-28
ch 5, anon.
abuseIt was a cute story, really, it was. I enjoyed it. I found the A/N commentary in the middle of chapters very distracting, however. Very good though, you're a great writer.
Matrix Refugee
2003-07-02
ch 5,
abuse::Taking a moment during her vacation to catch up on fanfics...::

Aw! That's cute! At first I was scratching my head, thinking this was going to be some kind of expansion of "A Wish Come True", but I kept reading...Nice job! You do a good job portraying David's personality: Very human (Almost "More human than human", to quote "Blade Runner"), very innocent, very sweet. Great work! I can see that kind of sibling rivalry happening between Martin and David.

And of course...may I link this to my site? (If I didn't ask that, there'd be something wrong with me!)
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