I Like this, Thanks.

Please... Más, más, más...
Una historia super super romántica... Si Martin y David
pudieran existir me quedaría con David sin dudarlo.

Un saludo de

David Swinton

the story was really cute, but my fav was a wish come true and the one where he is her angel. keep up the good work! love always- Jamie f/15/kansas

It was a cute story, really, it was. I enjoyed it. I found the A/N commentary in the middle of chapters very distracting, however. Very good though, you're a great writer.

::Taking a moment during her vacation to catch up on fanfics...::

Aw! That's cute! At first I was scratching my head, thinking this was going to be some kind of expansion of "A Wish Come True", but I kept reading...Nice job! You do a good job portraying David's personality: Very human (Almost "More human than human", to quote "Blade Runner"), very innocent, very sweet. Great work! I can see that kind of sibling rivalry happening between Martin and David.

And of course...may I link this to my site? (If I didn't ask that, there'd be something wrong with me!)