i loved it. you should write more

Hey, that was really good!

Wow. Excellent.
Loved how it was all watched from the begger-woman (?) and you have some really powerful images in this fic.
Yayness, write more ^_^

Interesting, very interesting. I've never read anything quite like it. It works so well as a stand alone, but I can't help wanting to know more. Bravo!