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Reviews For: The Solar Surfer

SugarIcing
2004-02-05
ch 1,
abuseYup. This should really be continued. Very fun. Richie? Thug? Cute? Very accurate.
Please continue!
This is well written, but sometimes when you start a character's speech, you start out with a lower-case letter. Like so: "well, James Hawkins,"
Icing :P
Reikachan14
2003-09-20
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! Continue! Continue! Continue!
Emz7889
2003-08-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey i would love to have this finesed or continued i love the story please continue with it or finish it ! Thanks
Solar Surfer
2003-07-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh yes, please continue! The only two things I ask of you is to let JIm beat Serin once, and to have no romance between Jim and Serin. Thank you, great story!
Alyde11
2003-07-03
ch 1,
abuseWow, I like it. Yes, a continuing would do wonders, as it kind of leaves you hanging, like "Is there more or is that it?" I loved how you made Serin different: not dirt poor like a lot of people make their characters. THere's nothing wrong with a rich kid, right? Well, I hope you plan on continuing, anyway.
SuperNova
2003-07-02
ch 1,
abuseNice fic. Continue!
Moon-wolf2
2003-07-01
ch 1,
abuseYes. Yes. Yes. See I'm a good girl now I want you to continue this. I love solar surfing slmost as much as I love Jim. =D Now write more.

Moon*wolf
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