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| SugarIcing 2004-02-05 ch 1, | abuseYup. This should really be continued. Very fun. Richie? Thug? Cute? Very accurate. Please continue! This is well written, but sometimes when you start a character's speech, you start out with a lower-case letter. Like so: "well, James Hawkins," Icing :P |
| Reikachan14 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Continue! Continue! Continue! |
| Emz7889 2003-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey i would love to have this finesed or continued i love the story please continue with it or finish it ! Thanks |
| Solar Surfer 2003-07-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh yes, please continue! The only two things I ask of you is to let JIm beat Serin once, and to have no romance between Jim and Serin. Thank you, great story! |
| Alyde11 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, I like it. Yes, a continuing would do wonders, as it kind of leaves you hanging, like "Is there more or is that it?" I loved how you made Serin different: not dirt poor like a lot of people make their characters. THere's nothing wrong with a rich kid, right? Well, I hope you plan on continuing, anyway. |
| SuperNova 2003-07-02 ch 1, | abuseNice fic. Continue! |
| Moon-wolf2 2003-07-01 ch 1, | abuseYes. Yes. Yes. See I'm a good girl now I want you to continue this. I love solar surfing slmost as much as I love Jim. =D Now write more. Moon*wolf |