this is kool! i love this couple and dis story. keep up the writing!

wOw, great story, i love Vegeta and Gohan pairings. Can i hope for a secon chapter?

your not REALLY athiest, are u!!

Interesting narrative; very physical.

Ah, wonderful! I love stories that explore the Gohan-Vegeta dynamic, whether its yaoi, or friendship, or a mentor-student thing. Those two are so interesting together!

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LOVE IT! KEEP IT UP! a splendid peice of work if i do say so myself *applaudes* yay for you...you did great!

:3 MEOW!

Hey, that's great ^_^ I always love a good old Gohan/Vegeta.

Can I ask you a favour? Please may I host this at my Gohan/Vegeta website? the address is w.geocities.com/android_shelly ^_^ Please mail me at android71@hotmail.com if I can ^_^

Heh. Mesochistic Gohan. Got to love it. And this pairing, deffinently this pairing. People don't give it enough attention...

I love it. I'm a sucker for Gohan/Vegeta stories. This is very beautiful in its own way. I hope you write more stuff like this.
Dani-chan