Aw... That's such a cute ending! :D
Charly and Kai really do belong together.

damn...this stiry is really really great!
it was really nica and a good thing also is that takara didn't
rebel on charly and kai's relationship those two are perfect for each other!

Like it, in fact I like it better than the other twon you've made, for three reason:
1. The writing doesn't have that sort of annoying Americanish sound when you read it, liek putting totally in the descriptino or just plain not creative. 2. In fact, for once the last trilogy I finally see something that doesn't lack feelings when you write it
3. You just can't stop reading it! ^^

Aww, what a lovely ending. :)

i cant review on the second scorning, that is why i am reviewing here...i dunno why..but it says it is not a part of the arcive. and cannot be reviewed...hum...well anyway...i cant wait for the next scorning chappy! its awesome, as always!

alex-chan

Gee... All your fics go out with a blast... literally. Makes me wonder what will happen with Wishing For Eternity in the end... Something big, no doubt.

I really liked these fics. I have one or two questions, but I'll ask them some other time.

I do realize that reviewing old fics like this probably doesn't mean much, but I had to. In my book, you are a very skilled author.

she changed so much.. and so did everything else... wow... the story was great... i almost got grounded for trying to finish it in one day... it's strange about how Kaitlyn was so different... i hope you update wishing for eternity now...

Omg... this fic was awesome! Too bad it's the last in the trilogy(??) I would have loved to read more but oh well... ^^ Anyways, Just wanted to let you know that you are one of the best authors on and your stories are the greatest!

Aw this fic was so cute and sweet! And I just love Charly and Kai together! That is so cute! Anyways, about the RPG you mentioned... could you give me the address if it is still avalible! I would love to test it out ^^

*just smiles*

T.k-Kon

LOL! so i was right u played legend of dragoonsXD. oh well this fic is kewl, but u said u will write a fourth fic bout COTA. im WAITING FER THAT DAY TO COME:p. needa me to help? ill be right here, mebbe u can chat to me on msn. mebbe i cant be of any help but im willing to if i can^^. oh yea dun expect me to see me online 24/7 cos my com broke down, right now using me bro com. oh yea i remember u mentioned sumthign bout an RPG, send me the address. issit gonne be a wedsite? hope so.

I've always loved this. It's my favorite part of the trilogy. Happy Birthday! In three and a half hours here! Hope you write more mimi fics! I love them, there cute!
Sincerely,
Alexis

That was very well written and you concluded it quite nicely although the epilogue was rather surprising.
s'all good though.

such a great ending. I don't want it to end tho. Oh well, I'll come on sometime and like, spend 24 hours reading from Code of the Amazons to COTA-Temporal Slider sometime. I'd like to read an Epilogue from Kaitlyns time, that'd be cool. Alrighty, email me about the site thing, okay?

haha... kinda cool... tt now kaitlyn is actually kai n charly's daughter... but it will b kinda weird... caz u noe... kai n co. wld noe of kaitlyn... n they might b waiting for their greatgrand child... so... won't it b like... they noe the future... or at least... a bit... their reaction wld b different... i think... haha... takara n bryan... feisty... lolx...