I really like your writing. You truely portrayed Jareth as he is.

I loved it!! Is this a one-shot deal or are there more chapters?

love it dear

AW ;^_^; how sweet! Is there gonna be more, or was it just a different ending? its so cute, i wish i was sarah...i wish the goblins would come and take me away right now!...damn, didnt work, oh well, great job!

That was so sweet aww

this is cute you have to write more! :)