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| Darth Shenomee 2007-12-03 ch 2,  | abusekool |
| mcgwier 2007-06-08 ch 3, | abuseAt one part you have a scene with Gina which is this: "I wonder how Ranma's family is taking this." Gina asked to herself. Since the letter that was left never mentioned Ranma, how does she know about him? |
| Drifter950 2007-02-07 ch 11, | abuseAgain, everyone and his second cousin has probably told you this: You have a good spellchecker but need a good proofreader: clam = calm wand = and rethink = rethought present to past tence "Have ever met somewhere before?" = "Have we ever met somewhere before?" There are few of these and deffinatly do not distract from storyline much. Again also, thanks for a very good read. May the MUSE be eith you! |
| Drifter950 2007-02-07 ch 6, | abuseProbably everyone and their second cousin has told you this: Clams = things you find at certain beaches and seafood resteraunts that are ediable. Calm = as in "calm before the storm" and "calm down". Hope this is not to irritable and helps PS. I am loving this story and hope you have many more. May the MUSE be with you! |
| Morden Night 2007-01-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseSorry dude but I really don't like this fic. I wanted to, but I just couldn't. It was a great idea, but unfortunately poorly developed. Beter luck with whatever fic your next project is. |
| Iceman 2006-01-08 ch 13, anon. | abuseWhat about Lord High Elder Gothwrain? |
| Iceman 2005-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseBrianna = sucker! |
| ss4-link 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat Story to bad it had to end I look forward to your other work. |
| Phorcys 2005-05-09 ch 18, | abuseGood chapter |
| Sonic 1 2005-04-27 ch 5, anon. | abuseSee 3 grammer no-nos in this part: "Kelly, I look for an engagement ring." and "How much do I own?" and "Really thanks." Kinda confusing if you ask me. The rest is way past cool. |
| Lord of the Pit 2005-04-27 ch 18, | abuseit doesn't have the 'flash' or something, like in the preivious chapters. but it was still decent. |
| Ryan L. Spradling 2005-04-26 ch 18, | abuseWay past cool. Have you seen my work? I would like to see a reveiw from you 1 of these days. |
| Jerry Unipeg 2005-04-25 ch 18, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER!! |
| Innortal 2005-04-24 ch 18, | abuseLOL, I can't add anything to it. I love this story, especially the humor you add to it. You could have Genma and crew arrive at the dojo to see the four were-rats in animal form, with Genma producing a stick and yelling, "Ah, dinner, just like when I was on the road." We then flash forward to see Soun and Genma picking at some bones with Akane and Nabiki huddling away from them muttering about the screma those rats kept making. Have fun. Innortal |
| Silverscale 2005-04-24 ch 18, | abuse*falls down laughing* |