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| Nariko.Hoshi 2006-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseHmm... I don't normally go for incoherant angst, but that was really good... nice metaphor, too, it suited Kaiba perfectly. Beautifully written. -Hoshi |
| Cheeky-eyes 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME! It kinda confused me though. Ah well, can you do another chappie? Plz, plz, plz! Awesome fic, wonderfully written, (even if it confused me) and plz do another chappie! Cya |
| Sour Schuyler 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was a beautiful, metaphorical approach to Yugi/Kaiba. The Ryou/Bakura in it was great, and all of the imagery appealing to the sense of sight and hearing created a wonderful affect. Oh, and I liked the pairing as well. |
| Go-ruden Kiba 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abusewow. i get it. is there a chapter two? this is amazeing, and o-so well written! hope to read more of your tales! |
| Slightly Sinister Sinestra 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseKeep writing! Please, please, please! You actually make this couple sound right. I'm desperate to know what happens next. Stunning! |
| PyrrhicVictories 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuse...for just one little moment, this broke my heart. thank you. |
| pixiestickchild 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abusethat is amazing!! |
| zeynel 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseJust one world: WOW! |
| samurai-ashes 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful, especially the last line. I like how you tied Ryou into it, and everyone -- nothing seemed at all overdone. That was just... wow. Amazing. - ashes - |
| Van 'n' Kim 2004-09-24 ch 1, | abuseI love the metaphors! |
2003-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Really good. I love your use of the metaphors and the flashback with Ryou to explain the story. |
| Ryo0oki 2003-10-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. That... exceeded my expectations tremendously. See, I have a habit of finding a yaoi story with lots of reviews and browsing that author's favorite stories to find good ones. Unfortunately, that doesn't always work, so imagine my surprise when I acutually come across a good fic. Adorable, beautiful, and best of all, IN CHARACTER. Good job. |
| Suppis Tenshi 2003-09-21 ch 1, | abuse...O.O...Wow...this is one of the absolute best pieces of writing I've ever read! So metaphorical and just damn beautiful, I luv the interpretation of metaphors, and how perfect it works with this fic...its true I think...poor Yugi and even Seto..you portrayed them wonderfully..I don't even know what to say about this fic, it leaves such a weird strange feeling in your heart after reading it...I feel Yugi's pain and loss and something else that can't be defined...and Seto, its just sad...and Ryou and Bakura, so sad as well...God I don't know what to say, but keep up this awesome writing of yours! I'll be looking you up for future writings! |
| Cherrii 2003-09-21 ch 1, | abuse0_o Deep... |
| m00shrum 2003-08-22 ch 1, | abuseWow... what can I say? Yuugi's emotions are so real and not to mention in-character. The imagery is amazing. I love the poetic language you use. And that part where Yuugi thanks Kaiba for his "gift" and gives him his Armored Glass card was so touching and well-described. This is the first fic going in my favorites. =] |