Whee, mini-Balrogs! I kinda want to work in the Matrix division, given my varied interests... but Rings needs all the agents it can get at present. *pouts* Oh well, very well done!

Hehe. Very good job. In fact, I like it so much that I was wondering if you would make a parody of one of my stories. It's on and the title is If I Could Feel... It's about 19 chaps now, but there's a couple chaps you might want to skip over for the sake of your rating. Trust me, it's totally out of character, being an a female agent+agent smith. PLEASE would you do it? It would be so much fun to see my story made fun of. Please?

A crossover. I hate crossovers. So annoying.
But anyway, I'm glad you killed the Sue. She deserved it, bloody ** that she was. Could you tell me who the author was? I might have to forcefully enroll her at the Official Fanfiction University of Crossovers.
Please, continue with the Sue killings! Please!
Autumn
Course Co-ordinator of OFUC

I must say that the story is very good.
While the Matrix continuum isn't as beset by Sues as LotR or HP, it still needs cleaning up. Thanks for the good work
Perdu
P.S. You might want to remove the author's note as a first chapter. Sue authors might feel petty and report it.

On behalf of the Worlds Apart Mary Sue Hunters, I congradulate both of you. That was great! We've set up some very interesting commentaries at http://marysue.proboards25.com/index.cgi?action=logout in case you ever get bored enough.
Ja ne,
~Insane Pineapple from Naboo

Speaking as a fellow PPCer, FF division(http://w.rpgclassics.com/fanfics/protectorsoftheplot1.shtml), I have to say that ROCKED. Bravo. \/^_^

"She makes the explosions that makes the peoples fall down."

BWAHAHA! I don't think I have the words to do justice to your amazing abilities.

But I do have the words to inform you of a possible next target.

"How I Found Out About the Matrix" by Jedi Master Elf. *shudders* I would have left a better review, but I just had to go Sue hunting and read the whole thing. Owwez! My head! Make her pay for what she's done!! Daughter of Morpheus my shaply behind!

This is just brilliant, I love it. 

Does the PPC have recruiting drives? Where does one enlist?

Please, keep these things coming.

WAHAhAHAHA! A Matrix PPC! Keep it up!

Hehehe this is great. Die Sues die! I love that little mini-Balrog poem too, I'm gonna start reciting that at people. I hope you mend some more fics soon!

I heart the pair of you. I'd offer you my help, but you obviously don't need it!

Thank you for killing the damn sue!

Ah, canon defenders. So few indeed. The wake up call is greatly appreciated (not like anyone really seems to notice it). The only thing I have to say is that you might want to run a grammar and spellcheck on your future works. It'll make you seem more intimidating. ^_~

Oh, YAY that was so happy. You must write more, you must!! That was one of the worst Sue's I've ever seen...geez, deleting Trinity! I've read some nasty Harry Potter Mary Sue's too, you should comment on those, they can get nasty, worse than this, even. WRITE MORE, THEY'RE FUNNY AND GREAT! LOVE IT!!

I'm checking out the story like Suzine suggested to do on the Dragonlance Forums. By the way, I added both of your profilies to my Favorite Author's list. Anyway, I've never checked out fanfics on the Matrix before, but I like this story. ~Raven

Yay! Go plot police! I was really laughing about this fic. This is good stuff! Unfortunately, I can't think of a target. In the LoTR section, that's easy but not here...:( ah well. FIght the good fight! :D