It was good and injoyable, personaly a very humorous rewrite.

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Hahaha. LMAO. Carolyn tell your brother that he's got a great sense of humor. Hopefully, he'll continue this.

*is laughing like a maniac* THIS FIC KICKS ** AND IS SO FREAKING FUNNY! HEY IS SORA AND RIKU AND...*an hour later* AND THE LITTLE CRIKET DUDE AND...
Sora and group: THEY GET THE DAWM PICTURE ALREDY!!
me:0_0...ALRIGHTY THEN GOOD LUCKKERS ON THE FIC SOILDER!! *salutes*
sora and group:*sweatdrop*...stupid pyro maniac.

yes its cara, yes cara, O FOR HEAVENS SACKS CARA YOUR NEIGHBOR!! sorry bout' that well can you inclue m in it PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'am Toms friend PLEASE consider THANKS!
Sincerly,
Cara

ok it good i think it could have been a little better an how olds your brother he says cuss word man i hate those freakin word well its a good story after all see ya

WOW, Very interesting but I dont think Leon will be laughing at a time like that. Hey but I like thats all that counts right.