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Reviews For: MoanGaspPant - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

Difficile
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abuseHOT.
MochaCocaFan
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseA bit confusing. Try separating the different scenes w/ lines or special marks.
mystralwind
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abusewell, he never did answer the question..lol
Nikki
2007-07-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseLOL... That was awsome! ^.^ ... Yay trees!
ObSeSsEd WiTh ROXAS
2007-06-25
ch 1,
abusetrees...nice...
firedraygon
2007-06-19
ch 1,
abuseI love the style of this fic! *snickers* The dialogue is hilarious, and the bedroom scenes are so very hot. Great work with this.
egyptology1996
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abuseI bet he's talking to Yugi. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS!
Randomness16
2007-06-01
ch 1,
abusewoohh! so much lemon! =D and yup... that's right... i was jsut thinking about trees... ( dreamy look on my face ) :)) kidding... love ur fic! ;)
MagicianGirl
2007-02-01
ch 1,
abusesuper awesome. good job.
Linzy
2006-08-27
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was...interesting. But in a good way. Interesting popsicle analogy, there.

Um, I dare to guess that Malik was talking to...Marik? Yuugi and Bakura also came to mind, but to me, Marik seems the least likely to ask that. I really have no good excuse as to why.

I see from your profile that you aren't writing Yu-Gi-Oh anymore, so if I can't find the answer in the reviews I'll go look at the next story, and see who got mentioned.
C. 'Vanus' deLeon
2005-10-28
ch 1,
abuseaw~ that was strangely, sexually kawaii. i think that malik doesn't pay alot of attention to ryous body if trying to think of his favorite parts gets him horney as hell. still its cute. ^^
~*~* Kage no Shiya~*~*~
Literaryroses
2005-09-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseXD Wow... I love the pairing and I love the story. I stare in awe at the awesomeness..
MariksMyra1614
2005-08-27
ch 1,
abuseO_O I think that was a very awesome story...sexiness. I've been looking for a good MalikxRyou...very good. Oh, and for who Malik is talking to, I'd say Yugi or Isis. Uh, anyways...off to find more hot MalikxRyou fanfics. If you have any reccomendations, don't hesitate to email me.
Arius
2005-07-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was so HOT! Well written too. Is Marik talking to Ishizu or his Yami?
TokitoXKubota
2005-05-15
ch 1,
abuseThat was absolutly amazing!! XD Please do another one like that!!

My Ra that is one of the better ficcy's I've found on here!

The autthersd arn't as good as what they use to be, I was pretty happy when I found you ficcy! =3

Please write more.
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