This was so cool! I loved the way you had Sirius and Hermione's relationship work. I also love that loose ends with everybody's love lives seemed to be tied up! I just LOVE fluffy and happy endings, so I loved this story! (But, you know, not just for the happy ending, the beginning and middle were good too ;-)!)

No," slowly corrects Sirius. "I ran after her." Watching Hermione's eyes narrow themselves into slits, Sirius calmly explains. "I turned into the Grim and chased her around."
"Sirius!" laughs Hermione. "You didn't."
"Yes, I did," argues Sirius. "If you don't believe me, you can ask Severus or Remus. He hit her with a well-placed confundus charm. While Remus took several photographs."



LMFAO I can see that. Hilarious




thats a very cute story. so sad but i loved it...though i dont get why that guy said to himself that hermione is the reason he had a grandchild...that wasnt really explained.

also i dont think you actually said how many years its been since school. so i was confused lol.

i kinda thought she'd lose her memomry again...its sad but i thought that would happen..then she'd get better.

but anyway it was a very good story. so sad. but nice. id love to read more of your work.

Looking over to her left, Hermione chokes as she recognizes the male’s facial features.

“What’s wrong?” questions Sirius.

“Nothing,” laughs Hermione taking her seat next to him at the table. Clearing her throat, Hermione smirks at Ginny before turning her attention to the man on her left. “Oh, Draco,” purrs Hermione. “Crayola called. They want their exotic colors back.”

*snorts* LOVED IT

Putting the finial touches on the release statement, Mister Kripples smiles. “It’s about time,” he happily mutters. Turning his tired eyes to the photography lined up on his desk. Picking up one with a young woman holding a small baby, he traces the frame with on old finger.

“Now its my turn to repay the debt,” whispers Mister Kripples. “I have just finished the finial touches. Mrs. Black might never know that without her, you my precious child wouldn’t have survived to give me my first grandchild. But I know.” Taking a breath, he gently replaces the photograph back on his desk.



confusing but guess i hav eto keep reading to find out more
haha

“Don’t give me that look,” softly mutters Gwen. “Exceptionally when we’re not at home where I can rip your clothes off and li…”

“Ah,” groans Harry placing both of his hands over his ears. “Way to much information!”

“Potter,” sneers Severus as he winks at Gwen. “You..”

“Can’t give us detention,” interrupts Ron as he moves away.


lol

funny

A relieved sigh escapes from Hermione as her eyes focus on him.

“Sirius,” laughs Hermione a watery smile blooms on her face. “I know that you’re such a dog, but do you have to be one literally?” Picking up his head, Sirius gives a loud bark as he jumps on the bed in dog from. Changing out of his animagus form he wraps his arms around Hermione pulling her closer to him. Leaning into his embrace, Hermione slowly relaxes.


haha so cute


grr that caseworker is a **

aww what a sad part. i loved when percy told his story. good job mione!

Where are your glasses,” asks Hermione.

“Magical contracts,” proudly states Harry. “I wear them when I’m at work. I wear glasses when I’m not working.”

“Oh,” replies Hermione. “When did this start?”

“Towards the end of seventh year,” offers Harry. “Before the finial fight with Voldemort. You and Sirius helped me pick them out.”

“When did Sirius come back from the dead,” questions Hermione looking at Sirius.

“Never died,” gruffly offers Sirius.

“WHAT!” hisses Hermione. “Why you…. you over grown child! Do you have any idea of what you put us through?” Slamming down her coffee mug, loud snickers greet her statement. Mischievously twinkling blue eyes rank her over. Don’t even give me that look. You are in so much trouble.

“Interesting phrasing there, Hermione,” laughs Remus. Looking at Remus then to Harry, Hermione notices that both men were blushing rather profusely. Huh?

Until Later


llmfao funny

though the contact part confuses me..when he is at work he wears contacts and not at home? well he doesnt seem to be working:(

hey,
I love your story! I read it twice, i couldn't help myself :D.Love the pairings! I think sirius and hermione are really cute together and you did a really good job at wrtiting them!!

thankz for writing the story!!

xx.

This is the second time I've read this story and I still love it!
It's so nice to read something new and original with this pairing, no matter how many timetravel stories I like with Hermione going back to the Marauders time, it is nice to read something other then that type of plot.

that was really good

This is a really interesting story; It's quite original.

I agree; a prequel is sorely needed! PLease!
Loved this story - original, funny, there was no way you could see the story developing the way it did when reading the first chapter, it was complex without being too complicated AND most of all it didn't have any of those unpleasant twists that just ruins the mood and makes you nervous about the main -ship (i.e. taking that Erin thing further by making Sirius think about signing the papers or such.

Anyway, it made it to my 'Favorites'- list.

Wow! Four languages! ...or did you use a translator? ;D I won't tell if you don't tell.

NO SELF CONTROL! I wanted to take a bath tonight. *sob*