Hahahaha
Yuki SO misses Shuichi!

Heh. I really love your style - it's what I wish I could write like. Good job!

Wonderful! Simply wonderful! I couldn't stop laughing, your Yuki is so believable! I know exactly how he feels, I used to have to write my lovely death fics in the same room my sister was snogging her boyfriend (yes, I was chaperoning -_-). It's almost impossible to work up the proper mood under the influence of such cuteness. Go, Yuki, go! you can do it!

Heh. Very good. You captured Yuki perfectly. (As well as the spirit of all writers.)

Sadly to say I've just noticed how well in character they both are, well for Shu in terms of Yuki's overall view mostly more than anything. The writing as a subtle sarcasm throughout that gives some humor without really trying! Yuki's POV is absolutely exquisite and the stories, like this one are simple but effective...lovely little one-shots to keep reader, any reader happy.

XD
well someone's in denial. I loved this, I really did.
hehehehe.

Oh, I LOVED that last line! well, the last two.

"Thanks to the brat, it would take him at least several hours to build up another bad mood severe enough to write that damn death scene."

That was absolutely delightful! Great job!

Just Jill

"She was still going to die, dammit.

She was."

...

"And she was going to die, dammit."

ROFLMAO! It's just so Yuki Eiri. LOL.

Some say that characters in a story can only be as intelligent, as clever, as EBIL, etc. as the author can be.

After reading your extremely accurate assessment of Yuki, I must say that...

You ** terrify me. Keep writing.

interesting, I liked it, interesting indeed, so..., does *she* die ?

xD so cute... and so well writen! really enjoyed reading this.

HA! That was just absolutely great!!

thats so good ^-^ he couldnt help but scumb to shuichi's happiness! lol. shuichi would definately call like that and yuki could definately not concentrate. lol. thats so cute. lol.

Aweman... *still shaking head/cracking up* You kill that chick, Yuki! xD Loved how you kept rotating back to "She's going to die!" mode. So funni. Overall, another winner! ~Musiq

Yay. ^_^

That was so cool. I love that story. I've probably read it three times now, but I never got a chance to review...^_^