Oh, I totally wish that sickle cut the top half off her head. FOR REAL. Or at least let the sword meet its target.

Aymes and Yume- or YuMI (do we really HAVE to give a SHIT about it?) greatly nauseate the past years' meals outta me. What a waste of natural resources.

You should have given yourself the right to decline characters. I hated reading about THAT self-absorbed, deprived maggot of a Mary-Sue. And to think you even lowered youself to help edit the grammar for her immensely puke-inducing self-written chapter. Much less post it up. Ew, ew, ew. Burn it, man. Thank goodness you took it OFF. Damn fangirls. Go marry her off to a toilet bowl or something.

No. That'd be a insult to the poor toilet bowl.

If the owner wanna do this section a favour, please eradicate them. It's not fair for the author to bear the flames for others.

I took the courtesy of reading the whole darn lot before actually firing away.

The good stuff: clever way of writing an author's note. I'm so sure the readers will never figure it out and get you reported.

The bad stuff: This sucks, and that's sad. Your Aymes Metallium is obviously Mary-Sue. I read her darned original stories by her original owner, and they just reek.

Technically, Xelloss is Xellass' son. She created him, after all.

You know what the whole thing adds up to? The six-letter 'I' word. Let's not go further for the sake of the poor children.

What the heck were your recent non-donor reviewers THINKING? What are they, on drugs or something?

Get a life. You need one.

Randy the Random "Wasn't Me"

So, I see you have a fan girl, who is Lord Bestmaster's daughter and Xellos's wife. Its odd for mazkous don;t have chidren, but its a fic right in a fic you can do what you wish. Keep it up I really love Aymes and her Daughter Yume

So I Have a wife its my boss' daughter hmm and a daughter never though that could happen but all well I find it very fun please write more

Xellos

Hay its me Amy aka The aymes of your Slayers fic, please I want more chapters

Its really great, plus I spelled Yume's name wrong its ment to me Yumi not Yume ok. Anyway other Info Xellos called Aymes me my pet Mazkou princess or. my pet thats the short version.

You rock!
It's working again... I hope!
Sarito's great BUT one little thing... make him less tak-charge-y... it's great and all YAY... but he's not that confident in his skills...
poor little boy...
But GREAT story, nonetheless

YAY! I'm finally in! WRITE MORE!

YAY! I'm finally in! WRITE MORE!

Wow! It keep getting better and better. I want more so much. When will Aymes, Xellos, and yume and be showed again? What chapter?

Great fan fic so far.I want more about Aymes and Xellos and their daughter. I also like Zentos. Please write more.

Its great so far. PLease write more. I really Like the daughter of Xellos and the Fan Girl. Named Aymes.

hey i really liked that keep up the good work

Sweet! That was a great chapter I want more. Please.

Hey keep up the good work it will be interesting to see what you do with the story and my character Slaal as well as the other characters.