Just found this story, and love it. Please update?

reitashnehelena

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Yes, where *do* we go from here. That was an interesting place to leave the last chapter. It's going on 18 months since the last time you updated. Is there any chance of getting more chapters anytime soon? I eagerly look forward to finding out what happens in the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

wow. Such an interesting story. But you haven't updated in a while. Are you going to finish it? I hope you do.

Ah! I don't get it!

Excellent start. I do hope you will continue. So if taking potions causes the symptoms, I suppose making them will also cause a problem?

I'm really enjoying this story so far. Hope to see more soon!

oh goodness. this is a VERY good fanfic. please write more soon.

This is an excellent story, Luthien.
It's full of the most wonderfully uncomfortable banter, entendres and quips. The protagonists; lovers seems too trite, are like two rams butting at each other, yet unable to deny the call of the spell cast upon them.
The sheer sensuality and eroticism you've managed to evoke from both Severus and Hermione is deftly handled. It could have seemed tawdry. That it is not is a great credit to your ability to manipulate the characters in much the same way as the spell is a manipulation of their emotions.
The initial reticence is fading, and with it, the true horror of the compulsion aspect seems all the more horrifying.
...And yet the pair of them, much though they would wish to deny it, seem almost like moths heading straight towards the flame.
Given Hermione's almost willing acceptance of the 'state of affairs' (no pun intended...much), I'll be interested to see how you deal with the tightening spiral of the spell and the inevitabilities of a solution found or lost.
It promises to be a very interesting and creative ride.
BTW - I hope you had a ripper of a day today too! :)

This fic is so good. Another person was looking for it. Now it's two of us who want you to please update! Any chance of updates? Did I forget to mention updates?

those two are so wrong! don't they know that they are madly in love and destined for each other?

Still reading. What will happen. Can't wait for more. I love your version of Snape. True to character but sexy.

I'm a bit behind here & am trying to get caught up on my reading*Ü*
I have the feeling that there is still more to this than either Severus or Albus are telling Hermione! Then there are the small bits of information that they didn't bother to tell her before she agreed to do this!
I think that Severus really needs to get his head out of his (_!_) and remember that she is doing this for him! The least he could do is treat her like she is a human & not some drone or concubine there only to serve him!
I am really curious to see what happens next!
Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^

The hell? If you can't take, "icanttakeit," then don't read it. Jeez.
Also - Luthien, I think that the mystery surrounding the backstory to this fic is the prime mover behind my interest in seeing it continue. Into what sort of trap were Dumbledore et al. trying to lure Voldemort? And why the spell? actually, why *continue* the spell? What the hell is going on?
Answer: Update soon, please!!

Hey!
Ok, I'm reading through the 3rd chapter of your story, and I think that this is a good time to review. Let me start by saying that you're a good writer; the story is really quite well written. However, it's a bit irritating to the reader to still be wondering What Is Going On?? this late in the story. While fixing this would require a serious rewrite (which you probably don't want to do), you might consider putting a Plot Spoiler on the first page of the story.
Thanks for Posting!
~MadMonkette