Very sweet... And very, very, very creepy at the same time. Holy cow, Naraku is one heck of a creeper O.o But the InuKag moments were great, and it seemed very in character! Excellent.

Man, Naraku is a very good manipulator...anyway, keep updating, it's really good!

Very well done. I like how it's a different take on it. I'm not sure if i want more or not hahaha

C: What a great story also very sorry about your hubby, I hope that maybe one day you can find happiness again although it might now be the same D: A wonderful Fanfic writer such as yourself died a day before he did ;_; I found it quite strange
Sorry I am rambling anyway I love you writing fave yes C:

An interesting story, though I think, even with enchantments, it would have taken more time for Naraku to convince Kagome that his lies were the truth. She has seen first-hand how devious he is. I think this would have been an even better story if you went into more detail of Naraku's attempts to manipulate Kagome.

oh, my gosh. i really love inuyasha and kagome together. i mean, yeah, naraku is sexy but he's heartless. inuyasha will really love and protect kagome and that's what she really needs.
please, oh please, don't put kagome with naraku. PLEASE!
i mean, in the event you choose to write a part 4.

XD great fic!

No u ,ust continue it. Cumon at lwast kill Kikyou!
Or let let maraku have that play-doh hoe!
lol
yet narakuis cute u kno!
lol yet imm stilla inu/kag
great job

=]

I really like this story and I hope you add a fourth chapter. It's pretty obvious by my name what I want the pairing to be. Inu/Kag stories are the only stories that interest me and I like your story although I kinda skipped through some of the Nar/Kag parts. I'm a really, really strong Inu/Kag fan and I hope that you will leave a fourth chapter to confirm the couple but I like this ending, too. InuYasha and Kagome are so adorable! ^_^

i liked this

OMFG U GOT 2 WRITE A 4RTH CHAPTER PLEASE DAT WUZ THE BEST STORY ON THIS WEB SITE IM NOT EVEN KIDDIN! CHAPTER 4!

sweet story! first naraku fluff i ever read. is usually Inuyasha and kagome or sesshoumaru and kagome. i do like the part with inuyasha. and the part with naraku i was all wide-eyed like O.O!

Wow. Awesome story!

This story is good, but you do not need to exactly use swear words to express certain characters. Such as Inuyasha yelling at Kagome in the beginning. Then again, it also shows how mean Inuyashe is, and therefore turns away from him.

love it!