Reviews for Why you should never kick Muraki in the balls

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Hyuuga Kirine 2006-11-04 ch 7,	abuseHi! Having read your fics, I just want to say that, in my opinion, you are one of the best authors in the net! I love your fics, your characterizations, etc. You can even make lovable OCs! (If only there was a review section for authors themselves, then I'd be praising your greatness more.) For this particular fic, I love how you made your Muraki still seem like himself, and yet apathetic (if that makes sense). I'm also seeing a hint of MurakixHisoka, and I must say I'm not squicked. In fact, I'm kinda looking forward to it if you do keep this pairing. (Wah, save me from the TsuzukixHisoka fans!) I also liked how you included the X references. I squealed when you mentioned Sakurazuka and Sumeragi. Are you doing a Muraki and SeixSub crossover? I'd love it if you would! I am definitely looking forward to your next updates (for all your stories on hiatus). Excuse me while I go read your fics for the 3rd time. Ja ne! (I think that this long review definitely belongs in a 'Praise the Author' section instead.
catinabowl 2006-09-25 ch 7, anon.	abuseah, so it's being eight months since your last review...just want you to know that there are still people reading this story. I like your take on Tsuzuki and Hisoka's relationship.
Chikyu-Megami 2006-01-14 ch 1,	abusefirstly, I'd like to admit I've actually read "Monozuki" and "When death comes a knocking..." in addition to this one But being not all the bright or sane, I'm reviwing the one you havn't updated for a couple of years, :3 I love this story, probably because I admire you style but also because up until now i havn't seen you writing a story with the good doctor a regular part of it, and I love the way you can portray him in a breakdown and still in a confusing way in character. (i don't think that made any sense) I also liked the scene where Tsuzuki turned away from Hisoka because of the curse marks, I personally am used to storys in which Tsuzuki doesn't care about them, or he's slighty disgusted but still sweeps Hisoka into his arms, and I was alway a little sceptical if thats what would really happen, and the scene as you wrote it was pretty much how i imagined it would go, and of course watching how you protray Muraki's realtionships between Oriya and the "so sweet she's giving me cavities" Eri-chan just makes me love the story even more, So as this reveiw slowly gets bigger and bigger- I'll nudge you in the side and pose the question, Do you think you'd ever consider adding more to this story and time soon? anyway, i'm going to frolic off into your other stories, so baibai now! throws cookies at you p.s about the pairings it could be my wraped fangirlly mind talking but for a moment i thought i saw Muraki/Hisoka (in a non nasty way) wandering between the lines, -
jenn 2005-09-16 ch 7, anon.	abusePraise and more praise!! I would so like to see another chapter, but as a tus x His fan I hope you keep them together. still, for a story as good as this one is, I'm not that picky! And Eri is so cute!
Jeriko 2004-11-06 ch 1,	abusehellow, this is just Jeriko, coming around to say that your fics are great, i got them reccomended to me by another person, Tatsuko, i think you know her :) COOL STUFF! fantasmalistic and supercalifragilisticexpialidocious! (wow, imagine if that were a HP spell! he he, the person you're dueling with could 'crucio' you before you finished the first few syllables!) hee hee, anyways, yeah. keep up the good stuff :) from the imaginary friend, Jeriko
futago>akuma-tenshi01 2004-09-22 ch 7,	abuseKinda funny...well, not kinda at all really...just funny! With Muraki, that is...nuthin' funny about the Shinigami...
futago>akuma-tenshi02 2004-09-20 ch 7,	abusereally like your story, i enjoy the quotes at the top! ;) i also love muraki... he's my fav. too! he may be a bastard, but damn, he's hot! baibai>yukie
fireun 2004-08-22 ch 6,	abusea vulnerable muraki! very well written. i am really enjoying reading this!
Krymson Tyde 2004-08-10 ch 7,	abusegrowl...Update immedietly or i hsall be forced to kidnap Muraki. i really don;t want to have 2 but i will! Hehehehehe...
Memoir 2004-07-06 ch 7,	abuseI quite liked this. Though I'm one of the people who nearly didn't read it because of the title.
chibisanzo 2004-06-02 ch 7,	abuseokay, ahem, a proper review this time. you made me CRY! honestly T_T. was sniffling along all the bits of Hisoka and Tsuzuki angst.are u going to continue or have u sorta stumbled upon a huge writer's block? oh well, i can't wait for the next chappie! slurps up angst p/s: i wana gif hisoka a big fat hug
chibisanzo 2004-06-01 ch 3,	abuseoo it was nice. sory for reviewing so late
namelessidiot 2004-04-21 ch 7,	abuseNa~ Your story was great! The OOC-ness was tolerable since it seemed to help your plot come along fine. At least it wasn't disgustingly distinguishable, just plain distinguishable. ^^; Anyways, though this story is interesting, I am sorry to say that I need to point out a few mistakes: I believe that you have some serious verb-tense problems, and that addressing the readers in this type of story spoils its mood. Saying 'you' to the readers in this story kind of drags us out of thinking how angsty this story is. With these tips in mind, I hope to see you finish this story with flying colors. Good day! ^^ ~Pocky-poo
Vitreus Rose 2004-04-06 ch 7,	abuseAh, a question? Are you still working on this fic, or have you given up on it?
Alanna Evelyn 2004-03-29 ch 7, anon.	abusethis is great- you have to finish it! Pwease?

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