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rain 7/5/03 . chapter 1
i cant get over how great of a writer u r! this story was perfect down to the last detail! this story was very nice and plus i love jen/wes and time force! keep up the fantastic work!
Flashbeagle 7/4/03 . chapter 1
That was adorable! I loved it!
Ibonekoen 7/4/03 . chapter 1
Very fun story. :-D I liked the "colorful heroes" fireworks. Very cool. _
MrQuinn 7/4/03 . chapter 1
well, this certainly was cute. A bunch of rangers at the fireworks chatting about recent history. Poor Doug ad Tony missed out on a lot, but they'll get it. I loved the exhanges with Eric, Wes, Gaby and Jen; the four of them are probably the best of friends.

Very good chapter, maybe I should do something like this.
Dagmar 7/4/03 . chapter 1
Cute. :-) Not part of my traditions (duh!), but still a nice addition to the overall story.

Well done!
Hope Strong 7/4/03 . chapter 1
great story, very fun! Happy independence Day (ours is tomorrow, july the fifth).

I liked it, but i have one questions: what's a zeppole? :)

S. Chong
Sierra 7/4/03 . chapter 1
"Are you drunk?"

"Just a little."

I loved that. And of course Eric at the end :) This was a really nice story, I can just see our two boys going at it trying to shoot little ducks! Hehehehe . . .

By the way, I like the pic you've got for your profile :)

Later,

Sierra.
Psycho Tangerine 7/4/03 . chapter 1
That was cute. A bit confusing for me only because I have yet to read the stories that introduce Rick, Tony, and Doug. But I can certainly see Wes and Eric compete at the shooting gallery :)
SilverRider 7/4/03 . chapter 1
Oh "now let's see if we can make our own firework" Little naughty on the side, but like it.

Poor Eric, getting pushed around by a women. *shakes her head*

C ya
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