Cass..this was good, but not very angsty for a suicide fic lol. Yeah I think you should just stick to doing humor, you're really good at that lol (as demonstrated very well by the first E&M)lol but yea this was still halfway decent ya know not that bad. =)

That was REALLY REALLY GOOD! I was really feeling the emotion in this one. You've got major talent, you should consider becoming a writer of some sort! And don't take my encouragement lightly, this is coming from a writer and critic! ^_^
There's something uncanny about the GianOli fanfics i've read so far on this site... in every single one i've read, Oliver ends up dying. Is it just me or is that weird? XD

this chapter was rather good, i'd say. It was sad for a while, then i almost laughed at the end. I don't know why. probably cause you called them the three stooges...i dunno...i guess u just have to be in the mood to write extrewamly depressive mood to write a sad story. Try thinking of something sad after you take a long nap, then dwell on it the entire night, then when ur bored out of your head, write a story. i dunno, thats what i do, i have a crapload of depressing things to think about.

OLLIE! *Sobs* My poor, poor Ollie...He was SO YOUNG! *Sobs* Oliver: Hey, I'm right here. Me: *Looks up* OLLIE! *Tackles* I thought you died! Oliver: It...Was a fanfiction...I'm right here...Me: *Huggles*

thats so sad! how ironic is that (Oliver killing himself just before Enrique confessed)... yet realistic. ur such a gud writer!

(im friends with Hayley... ur sis, and she said that ur fics are really gud, and that i should read them... so i am)

That was so sad. I loved it. I'm crying right now. Wah!

you draw really good and i love all your majestics fics... where'd you get that talent from?

Hey Cassie!!
Great story cass loved it i know i've read this so many times but never reviewed it well i am doing it now it was so moving makes u want to go out and do something very well writen m i think u could make this talent of ur go further if u want to have u ever thought of talking to so writter or something it would be very interesting to c what they think of ur story but ur a great writter and u will have my full support and help with anything u chosse to do love ur work keep it up
From dean

thats so sad *sniff* is so good too *sniff* i love *sniff* it!

That was so sad and so deep but it was a very well done story. You have talent. And a lot. Poor Oliver.
How many times does that happens in life? A lot!
Oh, well. I liked the fic a lot.
Maybe you can write something... cute for both.
You have talent, Cassie, really! ^^
Majestics rulez! Write more about them

that was sad...how's about writing another story where they can be happy together?*hint,hint*

Argh! Damn you!!
Oliver: Don't mind her. She's just mad because she wants to know what happens next.
Damn right! Is this a one-shot? It better not be! What's keeping you? Update this!! Soon too!

I LUVED it!
U have a passion 4 wrighting!
I luv all the sayings!
Keep up the good wrok Cassie I dont think you should just stick to Romance/Humour I am giving you truely from the heart advise that you should keep on wrighting any story u want.
Luv Kimmy

Someone reviewed said, "odd and disturbing". It's not! Really, I loved it! ^^ Of course, I'm a total twisted angst fan! But there's nothing wrong with sad, dramatic angst!
^^ Well, I liked it. But write whatever you want. ^^

I liked it so I have nothing bad to say, but I thought it would be a chapter thing, you know.