Very beautiful fic, great style, too. Hoping you write some more...?
Best, D.

Beautiful!! This is a fantastic write.
Brava.

Beautiful stuff. DOn't change it.

What a well written story. I can see Trinity thinking this way, hope you continue to write.

Plz carry on d dtory, i love it so far! get trin and neo do sumfing naughty!

Good one. :-)

Wow! I loved it!
One question though. How did your friend manage to get electrocuted?
I once got shocked by an eletric fence when I was bringing some horses up from the fields. It didn't hurt for too long but my friends never let me forget it. My brother now calls me Sparky cause of that incident.

Beautiful Story!!

Wow really good story. I like that analogy of electricity to how he makes her feel

Wow. That was beautiful! And any backstory is good backstory! ^_^

Wow. I haven't seen anything posted from you in ages. But it was worth the wait! :)

I initially thought, "Oh no, not another 'his/her hands are electric when she/he touches them" cliche kind of bit, but you handled it really well. I loved the use of the analogy of the electric fence, and how you tied it in not only to the first film, but to Reloaded and Neo's first nightmare. Really, really, really loved it. I honestly can't think of anything to complain about or point out as wrong.

So, is this a sign that you're going to write some more for the Matrix?

brilliant

Wow.

Your works have long amazed me; I've read many of your Moulin Rouge stories, and I am so glad you've branched into Matrix.

Not only do I love this ship, but your story is amazing. Please keep writing, for the sake of fanfiction; there are so many bad writers out there now.