*blink* Different. It definitely has some potential (Happosai redeemed? I thought it couldn't be done... ;-). Pink and Link are fun characters to see again.

However, Rakkyosai came out of absolutely nowhere at the end. It'd work better with more foreshadowing or more explication that he's still around. I also thought the dialogue jumped a bit (like a track was skipped, or this was oddly subbed ;-). For example, the pet cloud lines.

Oh...my?


-Joshua

good sotry very very good story. i want to read more...more please please please!