Very sweet. A good story.

What a wonderful resolution to all the angst and "whys" of PwF. Your first fic? It is camera-ready as far as I am concerned. Great characterization and flow ... what a sweet and so right ending. Please share more of your talent with us!

This was so awesome. Please write more.

That was an awesome story! I liked the talk they're having. I really would like to see something like that in the show too!

your first?! wow, that was good! when can we expect your second? and third? :D

Very sweet story! I'm glad Grissom made it in time! Very in character as well! Nicely written! Good work!

JM:)

your first? WOW! me likey!

Fantastic story! I loved the ending. I can't wait to read more of your writing. :)