 Get-Lost 2008-11-20 . chapter 1Before I hit the back button, calling a single child the third children sounds utterly retarded. He's one freaking child, so you call him the third child. |
 Devaro Ayanami 2008-11-07 . chapter 13I love it.
One of the single best "do-over" fanfics I've found so far, easily an equal to Higher Learning.
I fell in love with Aki and could almost feel Asuka and Shinji's hurt at not having her with them. I loved her interaction with Rei, both so naive (just in different ways), and Rei's mother-like need to protect Aki and get her to a safe place. I loved Misato's reaction to seeing Aki for the first time, I can easily see her jaw on the floor. lol
I just finished reading, and now I'm going to start on Aki-chan's Life.
Keep Strong! |
 neutralizer 2008-08-24 . chapter 13Wow, just wow. I've been actually following this a long time, but fell behind when it hadn't been updated for a while. I just found out that it was finished and reread the whole from start to finish. Amazing. Your ideas were original, very different from many of the other post-3I stories. That's probably the biggest thing that I enjoyed about it. The originality made it far more engaging than reading another rehash of some overdone idea. I look forward to seeing more works from you. Take care. |
 miner603 2008-08-15 . chapter 13 That was AWESOME! |
 alokin00 2008-08-11 . chapter 13 I am IMMENSELY satisfied after reading this .
I watched the series on youtube , those 26 episodes + "the end of evangelion " and I felt the ending was just totally wrong .
Shinji and Asuka alone like that , the only ones left ...
Just wrong ... And frustrating.
Even Basilisk , although tragic , wasnt this bad ...
Anyways , hope your eye catches some other fandom cause Id be happy to see you working on something else .
Your story had it all...
But , then again , if it really took you almost 5 years to complete this ...
Man ,I cant wait that long , I need a daily supply of my fanfiction ;D
Seriously , you are a very good writer . |
 Kyo Tetsuei 2008-07-15 . chapter 13Easily the most heartwarming chapter of the entire story. I loved it. Thank you for the amazing ride, and I believe I speak for everyone when I say thank you for seeing this through to the end. Now if I could only muster the willpower to do the same for my own stories... |
 Gally619 2008-07-10 . chapter 13 Thank you for finishing!
Good job!
Gally619 |
 Serve the Abbalah 2008-07-09 . chapter 13I almost cried.
Aki is so cute. ^_^ |
 blah81691 2008-07-06 . chapter 13 my god. I loved the story. hope to read some more later. Absolutely beautiful. nearly cried =) great work // keep it up. |
 NChen 2008-07-06 . chapter 13I've followed this fic since it started, though I've only decided to comment now.
That is because I thought it was doing fine without my commenting. Lol.
I think this version is really really good, except that the ending chapter needs more work. Your epilogue lacks a punch, a dramatic and epic new world. You could explore that. A good ending should leave the readers going "I want more!" but with the knowledge that it's perfect as it is.
This, however, leaves me going "That's IT!? There HAS to be more!"
...so yeah. The whole "life after third impact" needs work. Make it more epic. Tie their lives together more or something. Give them a future that readers would want to read more about, but would be satisfied without having to. |
 Lord Edric 2008-07-06 . chapter 13this was a great story, i'm kind of sad to see it end. but what an ending. This is how you end a story, it leaves a sad feeling that it is over, but an overall content feeling of a closing. You are an awesome writer, just took you a while to update everything, i hope you write something else this good too |
 DrendeSalkash 2008-07-05 . chapter 13what does one do when something so damn brilliant has to end? when something as great and inspiring as this comes to it's inevitible, incredible end? this was just an incredible, enjoyable, and inspiring story for those who write fanfiction. bravo, kudos, and a damn fine job! |
 Uniden 2008-07-05 . chapter 13When I first reviewed this story over 4 years ago it was one of my favourite fics, and I'm happy to see it finally finished. The happy ending was pleasing to see, and the final chapter wrapped everything up nicely I feel. All in all a fantastic job, and well worth the wait. :) |
 MyWay 2008-07-05 . chapter 13*applause* Grande! Belissimo! Superb! *More clapping* I was hoping you'd finish this story *whistle* And, you did good *pets head* this story gets and overall two thumbs up!
Now, bring me another that's even better! MUAHAHAHAHA |
 Tigerman 2008-07-05 . chapter 13Seriously, that's quite the ending. I like happy end too! Some rather end it in a more "Eva" way meaning that most important characters are gone, insane or suicidal. But the fun thing with fanfiction is to be able to change the spirit of one anime. Which you did quite well over those 5 years. I've been following this since chapter one and I'm glad I did. This was quite worth the chapter checking I did for 3 years before registering myself to fanfictiondotnet. The last chapter WAS necessary, if only to put a final closure and explaining some loose ends.
Now i have only one thing left to say. Good Job. And I hope to see more of your stories soon!
Tigerman |