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CutieSaiyajin
2007-07-19
ch 9,
abuseHA! I loved this story. It was so funny, and I could really imagine this happening in the Hercules-verse. I'd love to see more from these two!
WittyFae
2007-01-08
ch 9,
abuseThat was a brilliant story! Especially the court room chapter, it was just incredible! You obviously have a keen knowledge of mythology and you captured everyone's characters so perfectly, even the ones that aren't gone into that much in Hercules. It was entirely believable...as much as mythology CAN be believable ;-)

absolutely hilarious, I'm adding it to my favorites!

ZINFENDEL!
swordbunny4486
2006-11-15
ch 9,
abusehahaha, cool, dramatic and downright hilarious!
just some random person
2006-10-20
ch 9, anon.
abuseYeah, that was cool, how you blended the Disney with the original mythology...Very in-character. Funny, too.
blackpen
2006-09-27
ch 8, anon.
abusethis is hilarious!
xKiaxExPyrosx
2006-08-01
ch 9,
abuseHA! that was one of the best herc-movie fics i've ever read! :D got the link from your one site Pain's Domain... cute pics! i love the one with Persephonie huggling Panic. XD

this was funny, and you kept everyone very in-char, too. it's hard to do that. O.o but you managed to pull this fic off very well, in ways of the movie, the mythology, and all things considering. ;)

i liked this lots. i've gotta check out your profile now! :D

till later,

-Kia
TaB
2006-03-20
ch 8, anon.
abuseI like this story because it's suitably 'Disneyfied' and for little gems like these:
"And will we not," the Goddess of Wisdom continued, "stand as one, against that which is opprobrious, and debase?"

The audience paused mid-cheer, and some went for their dictionaries.

I was a bit disappointed with Hades though. I know it's tough to write dialogue that had you in convulsions during the movie, but here he seems just a bit deflated and bewildered by what's happening around him.

Otherwise, its an original little script and mostly in keeping with the characters from the movie and tv series.
Excellent!
Hai NeKo
2006-03-11
ch 9,
abuseomg this was so cute.
i dont rly know much about greek mythology but i really enjoyed reading this!
nOOdles
2006-02-08
ch 9, anon.
abuseHahah, I like it! It's funny!
Tar Irene
2006-01-05
ch 9,
abuse*grins*

I've never actually seen the Disney movie, but I'm familiar with the myths, and this is so damn funny! You have a great sense of humor and manage to work in so many Greek tales that I really wonder how you managed to work it all in - it's brilliant! I really really liked this story :D
katplwe
2005-12-20
ch 9, anon.
abuseHa ha ha ha ha Wpes tears from eyes. That was Hillarious.
Hedlund
2005-07-14
ch 9,
abuseI loved this story... I'm a sucker for Greek mythlogy as well as for most things Disney, so you can imagine my delight when I found this.

Sure, technically, this is not the way how Persephone's fate was decided, but what the hell - the story was very entertaining and the way you wrote Hades really impressed me. Is it wrong of me to be a little in love with this version of him?
Wrongful Vanity
2004-11-30
ch 1,
abuseOh! oh yay! the first time I saw Hercules I thought oh, Hades, all you need is a girl, you need your persephone. thank you so much for writing this! yay!
maya)-sleepy
2004-11-25
ch 2,
abusePersephone is Zeus' and Demeter's daughter

Good story have you ever red greek Mythology?
snip-snippet
2004-10-31
ch 9,
abuseoh i love this story, its one of the best hades/persephone fic, and Poseidon rules 'son' it actually made me laugh u rule
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