I'm glad they made it out alive! I love that Jackie keeps teasing Nick. But, he really is a knight in shining armour. LOL. I hope there is going to be a sequel. I can't wait to see what else happens with these two.

Poor Nick! LOL that was funny, the joking between Jackie and Nick! Great story! :)

YAY! The bad guys are caught! WOO HOO! ;)

Oh man! Poor Nick! He's being tortured! *GASP* I can't wait for chap 5!

I left a review for this chapter already, but ate it!

I can't believe that Nick got shot again! I think these two are the bringers of bad luck. It's a good thing Nick is always there to protect them or they would be in serious trouble.

Oh my gosh! You shot him in the shoulder again! OW! I can't wait for more! :)

You're kidding, aren't you there really IS another page to turn to. You wouldn't stop there?

I like it lots. Write fast, please!

Oh my gosh! Nick's shot again! *GASP* I can't wait to see the next chap! :)

Aww, that's so cute! :) I can't wait to see what happens on the bus!