I really enjoyed these three chapters you've written for this story, and I'm looking forward to more. I haven't found many Yui/Nakago stories of such good quality, so I'm hoping you're still continuing this fic.

Anyway, thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed it. =)

loved it

I've always wanted to see the Seiryu Celestial Warriors come back for one more quest. Awesome. Please continue!!

Syane…

I’m sure you know how good this story is (beautifully written, well organized, just mysterious enough to hook the reader), but please allow me to say that it is one of the best—if not *the* best—Fushigi Yuugi fan fiction I have ever read.

Please take this compliment seriously; I’m not gushing. I actually went through my collection of favorite stories to make sure I could say that honestly.

Many of the fics I’ve read are “good enough” or “inoffensive”, but yours goes beyond this level to incorporate aspects of personal style with a thoughtfulness that can truly be called artistic.

Your approach is intriguing and unique. Every idea that might have been a cliché has been turned into something profound and innovative. I love how you trust your readers to *think*—you don’t tell us everything right away, and it just makes us breathless and wide-eyed, waiting for more.

Your profile says that you have not abandoned this story, and I hope that you haven’t changed your mind since writing that. It’s very upsetting to think of this fic sitting unfinished forever.

This story is excellent, I'd really like to read more since there is so few good stuff on the Seiryu Seven, but seeing the time this is last updated...oh well, I can always hope. You've got wonderful detail here and the characters are ic, please continue this story sometime.

aw c'mon c'mon c'mon!! update plz... this fic is so beautiful

You know how to paint. The imagery is like so vivid. Interesting start.

powerful! i'm not a follower of nakago-soi pairing but i can't help not being impressed..your fic is so moving..how come you haven't updated?

i'd want know what happens next..kyah!i'm giddy with excitement..

WOW! What a cool story! I really how have this whole narrator idea. It adds a little bit of whimsical fun to the story. So far, we've met Soi, Nakago, and Yui. And I must say, I'm impressed by the indroduction for each character. Frankly, I really like how Yui is shown with some doubts, and that she is against what Tetsuya says about her seishi. Then, I also like how she seems more mature, and wiser. I really like this depection of Seiryuu no Miko. Then Soi was introduced. Frankly, I like the fact that you have given her a relantionship with someone else, because that really makes the plot so much more intriuging. Frnakly, it puts an obstacle between the two forlorn lovers, Soi and Nakago. Plus, I found the idea of her getting hit by lightning a surprise. A very strange thought, but it makes sense. Then Nakago is introduced as a businessman, which seems to be the only profession that I believe would ever suit him. The fac thtat he is the one to find Soi after she is struck is a bit strange, and makes one think of the term "divine intervention". So overall, I'm really enjoying the story. I frankly, love how you've created each charater. I really hope that you update soon. It would such a shame to see such wonderful work left dwindling. So hopefully, I will see an update! Till then...

Cheers...

cant wait for the next chapter!

COOL. I seldom if ever read reincarnation fics and this is such a cool beginning. Do talk about the other Seiryuu seishi too kay? Very wondeful effort

omigosh! THis is so good I couldn't believe that Nakkie-I mean "Andrew" and Kaen-chan didn't recognize each other I want them together! (is Eiesn like Eichuu from Seiran Den?) Oh I can't wait I love the writing style too it is very very well done! Please continue this masterpeice!! ^_^

Wow! That's all I can say. Wow! I haven't read this in a while! I found it on my favorites list and decided to read it again. It's even better than I remembered! You've done a great job with this! All of the character's feelings, thoughts and surrounding are described so well. And I just love the way that the narrator is Tenkou. That was a great idea. And this fic seems to cast him in a much nicer way than the series.
This is definitely on of – if not the – greatest fics that I have ever read. I can't wait to see Ashitare and Miboshi's reincarnations. I mean, you can't exactly make Ashitare a wolf-man or something.
One of the things that I like the most about this fic is how you don't make the characters just like the way that they were in the series. They're different. I mean, they shouldn't be the same because they were raised in completely different ways in the real wolf than in the book. Very few people do that and those that do don't do it well, unlike you.
I must complement you only last time on the detail in this story. You put enough in so that I can clearly picture what is going on in my mind, but not so much so that it bores me. Every place is rich and each feeling is clear. I can really feel what is going on in the minds of your characters.
I have to hope that this becomes a Yui/Suboshi fic, although I won’t mind if it is a Yui/Tetsuya. Still, it seems that Yui and Tetsuya’s relationship is a bit shaky. And Yui also seems to be thinking about Suboshi a lot. I do hope that in the end she falls in love with Suboshi.
I would like to say more, but now it seems that I have to go. My mother wants me.

This is a great story! Its full of details and emotion. Its also a Seiryuu story, so it gets bonus points. I can't wait til Subo-chan gets into it more! I don't really like your narrator, but it doesn't detract from the story.

All this dragon can say is that he is very impressed with this story, and eagerly awaits it's further development.