Reviews for An American Auror

Reviews For: An American Auror

siriuslycrazy4zach 2005-02-01 ch 8,	abuseGAH! Your killing me! UPdate!
ggyy 2004-03-17 ch 8, anon.	abusei really love the way ur story turns out.. =)
RnRForever 2003-08-27 ch 8,	abuseCool. This is amazingly good. I like. I like very very much. Please continue this!
catsncritters 2003-07-31 ch 8,	abuseSweet! I'm glad you gave her a fault, it's a step away from Mary-Sue-ed-ness, but I thought she unpacked her suitcase (though not very well...) when she stayed in the Leaky Cauldron? Dunno. Anywho, keep writing, I'm looking forward to the next installment. ;) -Adrienne
RnRForever 2003-07-24 ch 6,	abuseI think you forgot a few things ;) "and placed her beloved NAME OF BROOM beside her bed" and "He had neatly styled black hair and CHECK COLOR eyes". I assume the man there is Sirius just because I assume every man with black hair in HP Sirius-age fics is Sirius. My assumptions, of course are not always correct but if they are, I don't think it's ever exactly stated in canon what colour Sirius's eyes are, it just says pale as far as I know. So make up a colour, like blue ;) I love blue eyes (I have blue eyes lol) and make up a broom style too. The weirder it sounds, the better it'll work ;D This is cool, so she meets Moody now. Is she gonna meet Remmy and Siri too? :D:D:D Continue ASAP! Oh and thanks for sending me the email about the update!
RnRForever 2003-07-12 ch 5,	abuseOk well first of all, it's been stated in the HP books that you cannot 'accio' your wand because you need the wand to perform that spell and second, you made a typo or a mistake or whatever where you said 'whole in the wall' and its supposed to ne 'hole'. I dunno, maybe in America they can do the summoning charm without the wand or something... Well anyway I just wanted to point that out and otherwise, this story is GREAT! Continue soon!
RnRForever 2003-07-11 ch 4,	abuseWell this is interesting, is someone from the Order gonna be one of those people who are supposed to visit her during the two weeks? Like, maybe, Siri? lol continue soon please!
greenfairie 2003-07-10 ch 4,	abuseaw you must continue! -Laura-
Anya 2003-07-09 ch 4, anon.	abuseWow, Eloria, I love it so far! I love the foreshadowing at the very beginning because it really keeps you reading throughout the whole thing since you want to know what happened to bring about eloria's death. And I'm guessing there was a thing between the heroine and Sirius? :P Sirius (and Lupin) are my fave characters, so I love seeing either of them. :) At first, I didn't understand Eloria's frustrated actions and ability to switch moods very rapidly, but it became more clear as you went on and explained all she had been going through to get to where she was. And so far you've blended everything with JKR's own work perfectly, it seems. I love all the bits you stick in that deal with things in the original books, themselves. All the details fit right in. The research does pay off in the end. It always does. I can't wait for the next installments. Be sure to let me know! Like you already know, I don't read much fanfic, but I do make exceptions for stories I think are worth reading and that are true to the spirit of the books, themselves. :)
catsncritters 2003-07-09 ch 4,	abuseThat chapter was AWESOME! And you uploaded two in one day! Grins Keep writing and I'll keep reading! ^^ -Adri
catsncritters 2003-07-06 ch 2,	abuseIt's great so far, Eloria. :D You can take a scene and change it so that it still works with the books but also with your plot so well. Awaiting the next chappie! ^_^ -Adri

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