Wow I just found this story and love it!

That was another great chapter, you have no idea how much i enjoy this story.i cant wait for the next chapter. I like the way you incorporated Little Minamino's story. Fans can be helpful sometimes HUH? Anyways I hope you update soon, though i know its hard when you have other things too, but i appreciate your time on this story, when i get to read it, it keeps my Orphen X Cleo demons at bay!

Tsume-Kun

wow!
i've been waiting for this fic to be finally updated...
and i got it!
although i hope you'd update soon than annualy...
oh...
and more orphen/cleo mush, please?
i so love this fic!

Devon is mean to his bird...he should just admit he cares for her. *sigh*
Orphen's in bad shape...the flu always hits ya hard. LOL
I cant wait to read more!! ^_^

Can't wait for your next chapter! I quite like the pacing of the story and the way you've portrayed the characters is consistent and convincing. I was quite disappointed with what I read and the little bit I'd seen about the second season of Orphen since I would have liked to have seen all the characters get closer and grow. I read a bit of fanfic and found those few very cliched but yours isn't so I'm very happy to have come across your story. It's got everything I would have liked to see in Orphen Revenge. It's a pity I can't watch it as an anime :( There seems to be more conflict within than outside that Garik and his felons seem to be hovering in the background. Which makes me scared that he'll drop a bomb and destroy their semi-paradise, turning your story into a depressive tragedy. How did you come up with the blueberry pie/horse-phobia idea? It was very funny. I can't wait for them to get to the Tower of Fang. Hope things are going well for you. All the best.

How have you been? I hope you're still writing? It would be a severe loss to if you weren't.

So, I really like this chapter. Everything is calming down, and everyone's finally starting to get organized. They had a great talk with the wolven, but I'm sure there's a lot more that hasn't been divulged to Cleo and the others--and to us readers!

Keep up the great work! I hope to see an update soon...perhaps?

I just realized that I never actually reviewed your story. Just so you know (which I'm sure you probably do) this is absolutely amazing. I've never actually seen Orphen or Orphen: Revenge but I'm deffinately going to buy them now. Your writing style is wonderfully fun and easy to follow which just goes to show that you are an amazing writer. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work!

Kaliea

please update! it's been a while and i'm glad that your back! I was worried that this fic will be like those with no endings. I'm really glad youjr back!!

finally!
it took you long enough to update!
i think it's been a year?
but anway...
i really do hope that you'd update soon!
please?
and after this fic, better make another story...
coz i really love this one...
and i know you're gonna make a very nice, very interesting OrphenCleo fic...
ja!

Hey, Gil, been a while. For once I can't think of anything to say about this story. No mistakes in grammar or plot that I could see. I just wish Cleo would get in a battle soon. Orphen and Devon need to see what a REAL Alpha Hunter can do.

I've just sat down for about 3 days and read both your longer fics, beginning to end (though, not quite end with the last one)... and I can't wait for the next chapter! :) You're a really good writer, you keep me captivated easily, so much so that I can sit here and spend pretty much an entire day just reading your stuff. I love the relationship you develop between Cleo and Orphen... without digressing much from their original personalities. Again, you're a really good writer and though I know you can't rush these things, I really wanna read the next chapter!!

Um...Cleo just needs to go ahead and say her piece so the drama and healing can begin. Altho her flashback thing this chapter was pretty spiffy too.

Also, if you need a new beta, I'm always up for it :-)

YAY!!U updated!Im so glad, i checked like everyother day to see if u updated..That was so good, can't wait for the next chapter!!Thanks for the great story!

You remember when I said I needed to come back and review those chapters--Well, I'm at it again. Honestly, I feel bad that I've let so much time between reading and reviewing, but I'll have you know that I comeback often to reread this story from beginning to the last posted chapter. I can't help myself, this story just hits all my "squee" points.

Abstinence? I have that in my own life, so I need less of it in my twisted fanfic universe. Silly Doctor! How dare he ruin my fun! And Orphen's fun! Think of poor Orphen, the man needs a little you-know-what-nudge-nudge-wink-wink. *Cackles insanely* Be a dear and throw me a bone here! I just need the lovin!

Oh, finally, i was getting impatient, but it was worth the wait.

So, i loved the chapter, it was good. Though, i can't say i'm liking Devon much, he's very... stubborn and a little dense, and annoying too.

But, it still was a great chapter.