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Reviews For: Through Your Eyes - Reviews: Page 1 of 6

MikoKagome1113
2008-07-23
ch 1,
abuseSimply Adorable!

~Miko
-the-coconut-bubble-
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseIt was very sweet, but you did have quiet a few grammatical errors. There were also some parts that you could have elaborated on, like the moment when Sakura realises that Syaoran gave her his eyesight. It seemed to be just a one-sentence thing when in reality it was so much more.

I loved the ending though. Well done.
DELiRi0US
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseone of the longest and Best oneshots i've ever read. it brought (a lot of) tears to my eyes :')
~harmony~
2008-01-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery good!
Starre Lite3 07
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseLongest one-shot I've ever read, and probably one of the best ones I've read, too. Really sweet at the end. =)
insomniaaa
2007-10-26
ch 1,
abuseCute story :D There's a Japanese song called Because I'm a Girl by Kiss and the video for it is a lot like your story. (: Do you know it? I think this is such an adorable story.
Taira
2007-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour story was absolutely fantastic!! Great drama, romance, punctuation, grammar, the whole works! This is why people like to read fanfiction!
-CUte-kaWAii-GuRL-
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuse=D dat's so gud!! i luv all ur stories!
PinkBlueLilac
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseOh dear, how sad this is. It reminds me of this email I received about this blind girl and her boyfriend...

Oops. I did it again. Sorry. Anyway, it's good, but the page breaker and the Author's Notes at the end turned out stuck together, or is that just my eyesight...

Whoops.

Sincerely,
PinkBlueLilac
bangag pa
2007-06-29
ch 1,
abusethat's just so sweet.. its the sweetest story i've ever read so far.. i'm so impressed.. can't wait to read your other stories..
Enamored-Angel
2007-04-11
ch 1,
abuseOMg. That was really unexpected to happen. I loved it! so touching. hope you right more. =P
BigBang is V.I.P.
2007-04-02
ch 1,
abuseOMG!! The end is like KISS- Because I'm a Girl. So familiar with the chemical and everything. So bittersweet. I'm glad this has a happy ending ^^ If it didn't I would be very very sad. ^^ This took me 4 hours to read. lolz Because I was doing my homework while reading this. x]
Really cute CCS one-shot. ^^
canDii-aPpLe
2007-03-09
ch 1,
abuse*squeals* omg that was so sweet! i even cried in da middle bits! that was so good!!
AkemiLove
2007-02-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseYessh^^
It's me again! I love increasing the amount of reviews for your stories iris dreamer! I can't resist. And I like big numbers^^
Now AN-CHAAN!
-looks down at her review-
-pats her on the head-
Good girl!
And iris dreamer wrote the BEST blind story on CCS fanfiction! And I can accept it. Not like those pointless plots where authors do it to make it more interesting, where there is NO reason to make the character blind.

'Through Your Eyes' has an indescribable sweetness to it and all the more sweetness with Syaoran sacrificing what was most important to both of them in what they did as a job. Sakura showed him 'life'... Eyesight is important for them, ne? Since they're both photographers and they transfer what they see into a photo... creating an atmosphere and mood. Sakura lacking inspiration and showing Syaoran... happiness? No... sowwie! I haven't read this in a while... but from what I can remember, this story was beautiful!!

Hehe! Don't I sound like one of those readers who look for an inner 'meaning'? Me and An-chan were laughing over them since they don't know what they're reading and create a 'meaning' for themselves! Like a completely stupid plot line... they make it all meaningful!

But this story was beautiful... and filled with such a sweetness... and sacrifice. So there IS meaning! Hehe!

Would you look at that?! My first reviews have changed SO MUCH through the time I've been on this site! I write more now ><
I like typing^^

Cha-cha!
-gives iris dreamer a hug-
:)
Aesha
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abuseYESH! I've finally had enough time to re-read this story! (Actually... I'm 'supposedly' to be studying for my social study quiz tomorrow, suppose to memorize all the european countries and important cities..) Anyhow... you don't need to know that I am 'pretending' to be a good little girl and do my homework! ^-^

Okay... Let's get back get to the review! I've read this story once before, and I gotta tell you... you are now up there on my list as number one for longest chapter... goshies.. this one-shot was VERY long, but it was SO FREAKING AWESOME! Hehe. I LOOVEE to read long stories! Your story just made my day!

It didn't make me cry though... well, of course it didn't! This story is just too great with sweetness to cry over.. but I did went 'awee' so many times. I NEVER go 'awee' on stories I read on Fanfiction. I either laugh out of sarcasm, disgust, or humor; and I giggle at the romance scenes. Yesh. I giggle. Tee Hee. ^-^

So, yay! You're my first 'awee'..! I'm gonna put that down in my journal ^-^ iris dreamer got my first 'awe'!

Okay.. I think I'm gonna.. go. I might scare you to no end if I stay longer.. ^-^ just know.. ME WUB YOUR STORY!

Cha-Cha!
AnG3L z LoV3R

P.S. my friends and I absolutely agree that your story is THE best 'blind' fiction out there... THE best! Hehe ^-^
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